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indecentexposed

FIC: tell me i belong

Aug 03, 2011 08:44

title: tell me i belong
rating: r
pairing: chris/dustin (background mark/eduardo)
word count: 7,400
disclaimer: i don’t own them, this is fiction, no harm intended, etc.
summary: for daisysusan. harvard-era fluff, sweetness, pining, and feelings. oh, & some gratuitous porn.

( you could never be a mistake for me. )

what is real life, otp, fic

Comments 21

ca_daisies August 3 2011, 14:14:45 UTC

Awww, cute! Dustin is adorable and Chris is giving Wardo a run for his money in pining. I loved it.

indecentexposed August 4 2011, 07:35:47 UTC

thank you so much! ♥ i think dustin is sort of inevitably adorable... at least, he always seems to come out that way when i write him. ;)

freaky_nea August 3 2011, 14:54:51 UTC

This is so wonderful, it made me tear up a little.

This is so believable and so well written and I love the Mark/Eduardo sub-plot and all the tenderness and affection. Thank yo so much for writing it! <3

Please tell me there will be more!

<3

indecentexposed August 4 2011, 07:37:00 UTC

thank you so much for your lovely words. ♥ this just... this comment completely made my day and i'm so glad you liked it!

i have way. too. many. fic projects going on at the moment, but i would love to write a sequel to this at one point. so there may be more eventually! ♥

I HAVEN'T READ THIS YET BUT daisysusan August 3 2011, 15:07:00 UTC

I was kind of convinced that today was going to be lame because I'm sick and both moving and eating make me feel sicker, BUT NOW I HAVE THIS. GOING TO READ NOW. ILY FOREVER.

NOW I HAVE READ IT daisysusan August 3 2011, 16:20:16 UTC

and I am mostly feeling stupidly happy and Chris and Dustin and how is this so cute and WHY ARE YOU PERFECT?

Ugh pining!Chris just gives me so many feelings. I WANT TO SNUGGLE HIM. Actually I just want to snuggle this story and also you.

Truthfully, Chris doesn’t think it’s possible for Dustin to look anything less than really great-and also sort of sexy, although he keeps that thought firmly to himself.
Chris is THE MOST SMITTEN and I LOVE IT. Dustin is well worth being smitten on.

“That’s because I didn’t know how to tie it,” Dustin admits promptly.
People I am judging: Dustin. IT IS NOT THAT HARD TO TIE A TIE. HOW DO BOYS GO THROUGH LIFE NOT BEING ABLE TO? I HAVE TIED SO MANY TIES FOR MY GUY FRIENDS and it's always really awkward cause I can only do them on myself so I have to do that and then take it off over my head.

“I never do,” Chris assures him, which might be the biggest lie he’s told in recent memory.
Chrisssssssss, bb, stop making me love you more. (oooh look, a coherent comment. NOT)

Chris is vaguely aware that now ( ... )

Re: NOW I HAVE READ IT indecentexposed August 4 2011, 07:50:11 UTC

awww bb, i'm so sorry you're sick. i hope you feel better soon. ♥

THIS COMMENT IS THE BEST THING EVER. oh my goodness, i cannot. god, it is my favorite thing when people pick out their favorite lines, ESPECIALLY YOU BECAUSE I THINK OUR BRAINS ARE WEIRDLY SIMILAR. pining!chris is just... all the feelings. yes please, let's snuggle.

omg, the boys and the ties? what is that? i live with two, they are 24 & 25 years old, they run a freakin' company and I STILL HAVE TO TIE THEIR TIES FOR THEM. but i love the mental image of you having to put a tie on yourself to tie it, you are the cutest. ♥

i love that you love the way i write chris, mostly because i love writing him. he "talks" to me more than any of the others, really. so much so that i'll be studying or doing laundry or whatever and i'll have his internal monologue running through my head, and i'll be like GOD YOU THINK A LOT and he'll be like, LOOK WHO'S TALKING THIS IS HAPPENING INSIDE YOUR HEAD. what even. send help.you are my favorite happy grinch ever and i hope this made your ( ... )

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indecentexposed August 4 2011, 07:51:18 UTC

i'm so glad you liked it-- thank you so much for reading & taking the time to comment! ♥

silviakundera August 3 2011, 18:51:44 UTC

This was very cute. And you gave Chris a personality! Which is always exciting! (because I'm like Chriiiiiiis, who are yoooooooou Sir Hardly Appearing In This Film)

suffering!hangover!Chris was adorable. As was snuggling Dustin. ♥ ♥

indecentexposed August 4 2011, 07:53:15 UTC

thank you so much! i think in a way chris is such fun to write because the movie leaves so much to the imagination-- i have so much head canon built up around him for that reason.

i'm so delighted to hear that you liked this, as i adore pretty much everything you write ever. ♥♥♥