Comments | incubatorverse: Ohana 2- John, 2/?

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Ohana 2- John, 2/?

Apr 02, 2012 15:47

Title: The Incubator: Ohana 2 - John ( Read more... )

character: grace, character: kamekona, story: ohana 2-john, character: danny, character: maui, character: steve

Comments 14

tg_thinks April 2 2012, 16:24:19 UTC

great chapter. I really feel bad for Steve at the party, then he's sick and alone at night. just excellent all around.

heffermonkey April 2 2012, 23:22:13 UTC

Thanks you -

yes, Danny seems to need a hit on the head with a 'get a clue' stick and start standing up a bit more for their relationship. It will happen, once I drag them through angst valley.

Thanks for reading, I will try not to let Steve suffer too long.

jazzybabe56 April 2 2012, 17:23:08 UTC

poor Steve - pregnancy has never been easy for him - I hope Danny doesn't decide to sell Steve after he delivers.....:(

heffermonkey April 2 2012, 23:24:04 UTC

Yeah, but then should male pregnancy be easy? (or should I take pity as the writer and give him a happy Incubation period ?!) - I promise, Danny will not be selling Steve. Me and him would be having words if he even thought about it!

goldenthroat April 3 2012, 06:40:44 UTC

Great update. Loving this "angst valley". Can't wait to read more.

heffermonkey April 3 2012, 21:33:46 UTC

yeah I do like to steer this 'verse' through the valley of angst and hardship ;p Thanks for reading and so glad you are sitll enjoying.

abbeyrd62561 April 4 2012, 03:17:05 UTC

I just love this verse so much. This chapter was so good in showing just how bad things can get and how Steve has no choice. Danny was so mad it's a shame that he can't understand totally that it's not all Steve's fault with how he feels and the mood swings. Though it's so rough with Danny pretending. I can't wait for more.

heffermonkey April 4 2012, 16:08:05 UTC

Yes, even simple things can take a nasty turn depending on the 'free' person. And Danny is often stuck between a rock and a hard place in juggling his relationship and his natural behaviour as an Owner.

thanks for reading xx

redfish_123 April 4 2012, 07:30:01 UTC

Oh, the casual cruelty of the other Masters must grind Steve's soul and Danny being who he is can't excape it either. This is so good!

heffermonkey April 4 2012, 16:09:36 UTC

Steve is partly used to the curelty of Master considering his past, but it hurts probably more now because Danny doesn't defend him. But Danny is in a tricky situation himself.

Thanks for reading xx