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[FIC, CLAIM] Hereditary (s-CRY-ed, RyuMim, #12)

Aug 08, 2007 19:11

Title: Hereditary
Author: misteline
Rating/Warnings: K/none
Pairing: Ryuho x Mimori Kiryu
Fandom: s-CRY-ed
Theme: #12 In a Good Mood for 30_kisses
Disclaimer: I don't own s-CRY-ed or any of its characters.
Summary: She wants to see her father.
Author's Notes: Despite the evident lack of Ryuho, I'm kind of proud of this one. It's new and it's probably one of the ( Read more... )

! fanfic, ! misteline, s-cry-ed

Comments 6

sweet_chii August 9 2007, 00:38:56 UTC

I really like this one. Their child seems so carefree and it's adorable. ♥ And making her an alter user is also a nice touch. If it's TBC, then I'm definitely looking forward to it. :D

misteline August 9 2007, 03:52:11 UTC

Thank you. I don't know why, but the chance of Ryuho and Mimori's child being an alter user just seems so hawt to me. :D

You think I should continue? I had a couple more ideas in my head for finishing this fic, but it felt like things might get a bit lengthy, so I just ended it there.

Please! Continue! impure_cry_rose August 9 2007, 05:03:44 UTC

Hey, ok this seems to respond to request[ if you haven't checked your profile page, you should a request from me under this livejournal username] I would really hope that you would continue, and I wouldn't mind if the chapters were to get lengthy; I think it shows the reader a more detailed story and how you see this story going from the point and on in your perspective. Well, I really do hope you continue!

impure_cry_rose

Re: Please! Continue! misteline August 9 2007, 05:14:45 UTC

Thanks. I'll try. :D

asuka_was_here August 11 2007, 00:17:08 UTC

Oh yes, definitely continue! Though even if you don't, it was short, sweet, and cute, and very well contained for a drabble. I enjoyed it, which is saying something from me, because I usually can't stand fics with characters' offspring (usually because they're not done very well - this was an exception).

misteline August 11 2007, 02:07:06 UTC

I enjoyed it, which is saying something from me, because I usually can't stand fics with characters' offspring

Agreed. I can't usually stand the idea much either. I just went with the flow with this one. I thought it was damn sexy to have Ryuho and Mimori's daughter have alter power too. It just seems so sweet.

Thank you for your review. I really appreciated it. This was one of the few fics that actually came just... naturally for me. I started writing and I just couldn't stop. ;D

HMM. I'll think about a sequel. It might be under another title though. :D