Hoping to snag a reader.

[incommune]

Dear everyone: I'm thinking about submitting a short story to a science fiction magazine some time in the next week or so. It's done, about 2500 words long (7 pages double spaced), and I could use someone to give it a look over and give me some feedback (real feedback - I need to know what's weak, what doesn't make sense, and where the story is

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[helixnine]

I want.
I think this is the one I already have?

[lekiare]

Send it my way. ;-)

[siraka]

I'd be happy to take a gander if you'd like.