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[incertitude]

I f-finally finished writing this f-for Kiba's request... I d-don't know if it's a-any good. But Gaara l-looked it over for me and...and I th-think it's okay.

Comments

[totallynot_kira]

Not bad at all. It was pretty easy to visualise the scene you painted.

[incertitude]

Thank y-you. I don't think I'm as g-good at writing v-vividly like Sakura, b-but I'm trying my best.

[totallynot_kira]

I actually prefers yours over hers. It has better flow, and all she writes, far as I've seen, is smut. Keep it up, Miss.

[dee_um_ee_um_el]

i liked it. i like water. water is nice. the beach is a lot of fun. especially when the crabs start tapdancing.

[incertitude]

O-Oh. I don't think I've e-ever seen crabs t-tapdancing...

[sleepyfluffzzz]

That story was wonderful! I loved reading that Hinata-chan!

[incertitude]

Th-Thank you, Jiroh. That m-means a lot to me. I'm s-so happy you l-liked it.

[mindreader_eh]

I enjoyed it. It was nice.

[incertitude]

I h-hope it w-wasn't too b-boring too read... I r-remember you don't l-like that as much.

[stfuakamaru]

You should...focus more time on being a ninja, Hinata! No time for writing!

[incertitude]

I'm s-sorry, Kiba. Did I w-write something you d-don't like?

I j-just thought it would be g-good to have a-another skill...

[stfuakamaru]

No I like it!

It's just...distracting!

[incertitude]

It's d-distracting? F-From what?