Prompt Post No. 16

May 08, 2011 17:39

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Arthur/Cobb anonymous May 24 2011, 04:46:45 UTC
Years later, Cobb is a mild-mannered, comfortably ordinary single dad in the suburbs, raising two teenagers who think their dad is a bit boring and totally uncool.

And then, the Mysterious Uncle Arthur (only ever evidenced by Fedex birthday presents and private calls their dad takes in his study) and Co. bust through the doors one day, intent on dragging Cobb back into the thick of it all and turning the Cobbs' life upside down.

James or Philippa's POV would be ace.

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Re: Arthur/Cobb anonymous May 25 2011, 16:52:49 UTC
This will be happening, though it may take a few days to get it up here. And the way it's turning out in my brain, it seems to be running away from the prompt...

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Re: Arthur/Cobb anonymous May 25 2011, 19:54:07 UTC
ASFHGHSJSIANA.

Awesomeness.

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Re: Arthur/Cobb anonymous May 26 2011, 20:52:16 UTC
I love this!

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another truth [1/?] anonymous May 27 2011, 08:02:08 UTC
This...this kinda ran away from the prompt. And I'm hesitant on characterization because this is my first Inception fic and there's a smidge of implied Eames/Yusuf and...I hope you like?

another truth

Yelling, “Dad!” over her shoulder, Phillipa answers the door. She’s careful, leaving the chain on, and peeks through the space. There’s a man there, with a patterned shirt and hair parted carefully to the side. “Yes?” she directs up to the man.

He pauses and looks down, expression shifting into a smile. “Ah,” he says. “I’m looking for Mr. Cobb, darling.” He has a British accent; her face gets all hot.

“Dad!” she shouts again, keeping her eyes on the man. Dad’s always so paranoid (don’t do this, don’t do that, don’t do anything) and some of it has sunk in. She hears the creak of the floorboards behind her, hears Dad’s slow step. He stops behind her, hands curling over shoulders in a protective motion that makes her roll her eyes.

She tenses when he says, “Eames,” in a low measured tone. She hasn’t heard that voice since the last time ( ... )

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Re: another truth [2/?] anonymous May 27 2011, 08:03:35 UTC
She remembers-though it’s hazy and disjointed-that time After Mom when Dad had been gone, when Grandma had taken care of them, when this Uncle Arthur would come by every so often with gifts and stories and smiles, just from Dad. She remembers playing in the backyard with him and James. His tie got so dirty one time, but he had kept on smiling. But Dad had eventually come home…and Uncle Arthur didn’t come back again.

Dad sits up straight. “What about Arthur?”

Eames’s eyes shift away from Dad. “Kidnapped,” he says simply.

“Kidnapped?” Dad asks and Phillipa instinctively takes a step back. He sounds angryOnce the word computes, Phillipa is pressed against the door again. Extractor? Kidnapped? Mysterious British man? She’s missing something big here ( ... )

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Re: another truth [3/?] anonymous May 27 2011, 08:04:45 UTC
“…Oh.” And she’s missing something again, but she can’t figure out what.

“We can have the mark here in a week.” And Eames is giving Dad a big big smile although there’s no humor in it.

“Call me when he’s here,” and he stands.

Phillipa carefully but quickly runs down the hall and is sitting on the couch once more when Dad and Eames walks by. She hears the door open, hears it close, and then Dad is walking past the living room again, his expression dark and foreboding.

James is making noises at the television, yelling along with the cartoon characters. She ignores her weirdo brother and opens the laptop. She’s supposed to be doing homework, but this is more important.

She looks up “extractor” on Dictionary.com and gets, “a person or thing that extracts.” That’s helpful. “Extracts” is “to get, pull, or draw out, usually with special effort, skill, or force.” Okay, so…Dad has to steal something? She stares at the computer for a long moment. Dad, boring, uncool, Professor-Cobb Dad-a spy or something ( ... )

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Re: another truth [4/?] anonymous May 27 2011, 08:06:11 UTC
Dad steps into the room. “I’ll be back sometime tonight,” he tells Jenna as he scoops up James to press a kiss to one grimy, round cheek. He swings Phillipa up into a hug, kisses her cheek, and her breath catches. She wants to tell him to be careful, to not die on his super-secret-spy mission, but he goes, “Be good for Jenna, kids,” and sets her back onto the couch before she can get a word out.

That night, she falls asleep on the couch, waiting for Dad.

Phillipa wakes up in bed the next morning. It’s a school day and usually she’d be sleeping in as much as possible, but she feels wide-awake and uneasy, stomach twisting. She stumbles out of bed and heads towards the kitchen. Dad should be up by now, doing whatever he does at this time of the morning ( ... )

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Re: another truth [5/?] anonymous May 27 2011, 08:07:34 UTC
She can’t sleep one night because there’s a storm rattling outside her window and the thunder keeps shaking her awake. She intends to go to the kitchen to get a glass of milk; she, James, and Grandma always used to share a glass of milk, in order to “bring sleep closer.” She’s smiling a little at the memory when she walks into the living room; however, the smile dies when she sees the low light of the kitchen and hears Dad and Uncle Arthur. She must have gotten some of Dad’s spy skills because neither of them notice when she peeks around the frame.

“It’s not like that, Dom,” Uncle Arthur sighs. He rubs one palm against his forehead and frowns at the ground.

Dad takes a step into Uncle Arthur’s personal space. Phillipa has to strain to hear the words. “It’s exactly like that.” He takes another step into Uncle Arthur’s personal space and there’s suddenly very little space between them.

Phillipa blinks and the whole thing smacks her upside the head. Ohmygod. Dad…and Uncle Arthur? Dad’s saying something, but he’s speaking too low ( ... )

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Re: another truth [6/6] anonymous May 27 2011, 08:08:38 UTC
His glance over to Dad is unsure. “I…” Dad is watching but smiling full-out now. “I suppose. If you want, that is.”

She grins and nods and goes back to her cereal.

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Before dinner that night, Phillipa goes to that photo album on the bookshelf. She finds that picture of Mom and Dad and Arthur. With a smile she places it on the fridge, sticking it there with a magnet.

Daddy (Dad-dad, not Arthur-dad; they’re both going to be Dad aloud though because Daddy just sounds childish and she’s thirteen already) freezes at the fridge and draws his fingers over it. She bites at her lip for a moment, wondering if she’s done something wrong, but then Daddy smiles and walks back over to the table, smiling happily at Dad and her and James.

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Re: another truth [6/6] fuzzyniffler May 27 2011, 14:41:02 UTC
This was absolutely wonderful and adorable. Cobb whistling and You're both dad and just. Everything. Fantastic.

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Re: another truth [6/6] kirstenlouise May 27 2011, 16:13:37 UTC
He’s little-kid-tussles in the backyard and pancakes in the morning and perfect peanut-butter and banana sandwiches for lunch and slightly burnt lasagna for dinner. He’s coffee in a chipped white mug and slightly skewed ties and dog-eared books on the table and gentle kisses to the forehead before bed. He’s…he’s home, just like Dad.

Excuse me while I wipe the buckets of tears from my eyes. REALLY, ANON? REALLY. I AM GOING TO D'AWWWWWWWW FOREVER AT THIS. ;______;

I loved seeing all of this through Philippa's perspective---excellent touch. This was such a wonderful, sweet fill. A perfect morning read!

I hope you write more in the future, anon, because this is excellent.

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Re: another truth [6/6] anonymous May 27 2011, 17:25:48 UTC
OMG, this is just amazing! Lord, but they're all adorable.

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OP anonymous May 28 2011, 02:01:26 UTC
Oh my god oh my god THIS WAS WONNNNNDERFULLLLL ♥ I loved the way Philippa works through the mystery of Cobb and Arthur, and the way Arthur fits into her life. AWWWWWWW thank you!! It's just lovely ♥

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Re: another truth [6/6] sandie_eggo June 1 2011, 23:46:57 UTC
Just found this. Very cute. I liked that you used Philippa's perspective to tell the story.

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