[one-shot] withering

[inappropri8]

Title: Withering
Length: Oneshot, 1,664 words
Author: inappropri8 
Genre:  secret agent!AU, angst, (still)
Rating:  PG-13 (still)
Pairing: Written as Ryo/Uchi. But so damn vague it could go any way (still)
Warnings: 2nd person again. And angsty, again. (still)
Comments: I just couldn’t leave it well enough alone, could I? This is a follow up to Not That You’d

Comments

[ayumwu]

But it's GOOD angst when it's resolved. ♥♥

And come on, clearly faking your own deaths is part of the job description.

[inappropri8]

angst resolution is strangely joyful for me, even more so than is normal, i think.

c.l.e.a.r.l.y. plus, it was the only solution i could figure out for them to be happy. and it's so epically spy-tastic, i couldn't resist.

and continuing from the comment on the first part: pamphlets, i think, are almost the best things ever. like, they're so much crazy awesome most of the time. i worry about when i have expendable income that i'll just buy JE pamphlets whenever i can, even if i don't particularly care for the people in them!

[ayumwu]

Lol. It is, because you're sad before it all turns out nice and bubbly. :D

YES. XDDD Don't resist. Resistance is futile. Rofl.

a;lksfdj THEY ARE. I was actually (and pleasantly) surprised at HSJ's concert pamphlet. Lol.
Haha, it's like, a habit!

[inappropri8]

i like how they make me feel like everything will be fine no matter what angst happens first. i love angst hardcore, but i can't stand the idea of things not turning out happy. it's contradictory, isn't it?

did you go to the concert or order the pamphlet, or is it just the scans? when i have more energy i'll probably try and find the scans, because pamphlets rock and i don't have enough pictures of yabu or yamada.

[annedee08]

i read the other one and i thought you'd let it end that way.
but i'm glad you didn't! XD
i'm a sucker for happy endings, too~ XD

thanks for sharing~ =3

[inappropri8]

i couldn't leave it like that. in my head, it was never like that.

i'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting!

[letitbegin]

Ouch :( For some reason your story really hurts. Like I felt all of the sadness and despair from the speaker which made me a bit broken but then his love is so perfect that I continue to ache with my poor, bruised little heart. Generally I like more melancholy endings, but I'm happy for the happiness in this case. I like how this was almost entirely made up of inner thoughts and feelings. I like that he drank vodka in remembrance. I like that you paid attention to the fact that he drank vodka on an empty stomach and how painful that is. I like the original concept of your story because I likes me some espionage and spy boys. I'd like it if you elaborated and wrote more but I like that this is an ending and I feel closure and I feel satisfied, though, still strangely sad. Loved it.

[inappropri8]

yeah, words totally don't express how glad i am you liked it. like at all. i'm sorry it hurt you, but kind of weirdly glad because that's such a big compliment. i wasn't too confident in this part, so your comment is even more meaningful to me. as for elaboration, i'm trying really hard not to expand on eito living in the seaside town together. but i eventually probably will.

again, so glad you liked it and thanks so so much for commenting.

[letitbegin]

Actually when I thought of elaboration, I thought of their life before it all went down, back when they loved each other without knowing it. But seaside stories are a particular love of mine so either way, I'm sure if you write more it'll be marvelous.

[inappropri8]

after i replied i thought, maybe she meant elaboration about their past. i dunno how well i could write secret agent ryo and uchi without making it hardcore angst like i did here. i'll probably eventually try and if i fail at it, i'll try the seaside!eito one. but i have several fics in the works i think i need to finish before i start anything else. none of the fics i've written lately were planned/supposed to happen at all. i'm gonna try not to get distracted anymore.

[trivialaffair]

Thanks for telling me about this because it was the first fic I checked now that I have time, and I'm so glad it was. This was awesome! Just...awesome. And aren't we all suckers for happy endings? XD

[inappropri8]

i'm super glad you liked it! as for happy endings, i was gonna try and make a reference to the Say Hi song "Prefers Unhappy Endings" but i couldn't word it correctly. so, yeah, happy endings are better than unhappy endings.

[trivialaffair]

Hahaha word. XD

[closetchild_]

aaahsjadhgfhh.
Both of these.
Are so damn good really.
And, and, a happy ending aksdjksajkasjkdasjkdh <33

*__*

<3

[inappropri8]

oh wow, i got a keysmash and cursing. i feel so accomplished. i'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting!