[one shot] You are Invisible

Nov 20, 2008 03:35

Title: You are Invisible
Length: Oneshot, 4,073 words
Author: inappropri8 
Genre: AU, angst, vaguely fluffy sappy bits at the end
Rating: R for sexual situations and language
Pairing: Subassan,
Warnings: 2nd person angstiness.
Comments: I don't even know. i totally should not have written this, i have, like, 5 fics i'm actually supposed to write already. but ( Read more... )

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Comments 25

whited_79 November 21 2008, 07:19:27 UTC
don't know why I just want to cry (in happiness) over this...though it's AU it felt so real and you even managed to squeeze Subaru's past in there...this is a good read! :)

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inappropri8 November 21 2008, 12:26:07 UTC
awe, i kind-of-almost made someone (want to) cry!! that should not be an accomplishment, should it? i'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comment!

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tsuyonshi November 21 2008, 13:03:29 UTC
Ack this was so beautiful I don't know what to say, it's just perfect.
I'll just leave a heart and put it in my memories, yes? :D ♥

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inappropri8 November 21 2008, 16:30:49 UTC
ooh, memories! thank you so much, that means a lot! hearts make me happy too. i'm happy you liked it, thanks so much for the comment!

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ceylon_miko November 21 2008, 18:35:40 UTC
ah my heart is melting. <3 I love this. I'm so glad Yasu made Baru happy. ^^

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inappropri8 November 21 2008, 23:12:12 UTC
haha, i'm glad you liked it! happy Baru makes me happy too. except i just realized that lj took out all my formatting, so not of the italicized words were italicized correctly. so if it was confusing with the dialogue, that'd be why. thanks for commenting!

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ceylon_miko November 22 2008, 02:32:33 UTC
nah it really wasn't confusing. I've seen people do that on purpose in their fics before. but you did a lovely job on the fic ^^

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inappropri8 November 22 2008, 11:04:41 UTC
ah, that's a relief-ish. thanks for telling me

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ohmiya_sg November 22 2008, 18:34:25 UTC
I'm such a sucker for sad!Baru finding happiness... *_____________* I really enjoyed this.

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inappropri8 November 24 2008, 01:49:36 UTC
me too. i tend to write it a lot, haha. and yay! subbing goddess liked my fic! that makes me way happier than it probably should. thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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molkita November 23 2008, 04:38:03 UTC
This was so beautiful ♥
*saves to memories*
Thank you so much for sharing.

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inappropri8 November 24 2008, 01:51:08 UTC
this comment makes me super happy. beautiful and memories? i'm totally flattered. thanks for commenting! i'm glad you liked it!

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