Comments | inanna7: First Snow

inanna7

First Snow

Dec 15, 2008 18:36

Title: First Snow ( Read more... )

heather lisinski, edward beck, 1st snow

Comments 5

nativefloridian December 16 2008, 02:34:08 UTC

so... this is sort of a loop, connected to your 27 July 2008 post?

inanna7 December 16 2008, 20:21:40 UTC

well...yeah, kind of. (Hmm, could I give you a fuzzier answer? LOL) I want Always Love to be sort of a circular story that starts with that post and ends shortly after that time period. So this story is me jumping ahead a bit and giving people a bit of a peak afterward ( ... )

ditte3 December 16 2008, 08:59:27 UTC

I love the whole story.

inanna7 December 16 2008, 20:22:55 UTC

:) Thank you. I am glad to know that you like it so well. It means a lot.

shirleyann66 December 17 2008, 23:44:35 UTC

*sniffle*

Very lovely. I don't even know what else to say except aawwwwwww...and...Wellington? New Mexico? Huuuuuhhhhh?? What happens? How do they find Angel? [whiny voice] When's the next chapter getting done??? [whiny voice]

Okay, I know you've been working insane hours this month, so really - no pressure LOL - but starting in mid-January, boy...or not... ;)

“What? If you ask me, it was about time you found her,” Angel replied.

LOL - you tell 'im, Angel. :)

Heather forced out the tube in one long sputtering cough.

Oy. Poor Heather. My brother has been on a respirator several times, and he tells me that removing the tube is extremely painful and very...unpleasant - for many reasons. I cringed when I read this line.

I liked how Beck had to figure out which path to take - and how he kept trying until he found the right one. :) Aaaaawwwwwww. It makes me feel very warm and fuzzy.

Thanks for sharing - particularly during this crazy busy time.