Fanfiction: English as a Second Language

[inafrozenworld]

Title: English as a Second Language
Characters: Fye, Kurogane
Rating: PG-13: Language in this chapter
Summary: He was already tackling his ex-wife, custody over their two small children and his new life alone, he was expecting a mysterious foreign lodger to be a hassle… quite the opposite… A single chance encounter brought them together for the

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[inafrozenworld]

:D Thank you! I think I can even remember writing and being pleased with that line - I'm really happy you like it!

Must be a really weird comparison :O I mean I was a little weirded out when it was just the social reclusiveness I could relate to, that must be even stranger to read lol

Lol might get around to some other stories in the near future :) Fingers crossed! Though the fandom seems kind of... lifeless right now :(

[inafrozenworld]

Yeah I was expecting that but it's really good to know there will still be some fellow followers :D

Thank you! :)

[taigrin]

It seems the fic is ending so pleeeeeease, tell me it isn't! I guess it will have 3 or 4 more chapters but that will be it? :O

And although he accepted the fact, it frightened him how much it pained him.

Yay Kurogane, go for it! He was so cute in this chapter, I wanna hug both of them, haha.

& lol

[inafrozenworld]

I actually have no idea but maybe even more than four. I've not written much of it yet ^^' So it's ending but it'll take a while to get there.

Lol thank you! :D

[akitochiaki]

*is going to go find a little corner to cry in*

Baww, the first half of the chapter is very good (even if it felt strange- I rp Fay's twin and he would pretty much pass out at the tought of being like that. He's a prude. XD). The rest is too, don't get me wrong! But there's something in the flashback that... ;_;

[inafrozenworld]

*tries to pull away from corner whilst patting back and apologising profusely*

That must be so weird for you to read then XD Poor Yuui/Fai! And now I know why you were one of the first people to make a Syaoron comment lol Thanks a lot! I didn't have much confidence in the first bit at all :D It really made me happy to read that!

[akitochiaki]

Oooh yes I am a dirty fangirl XD

It was actually way more confusing than just RPing the character in a completely different way. The thing is that for some strange reason I am the Fye to some people and the Yuui to others. I tend to get things mixed up =w=;

[inafrozenworld]

XD I had to be reading/watching Horitsuba when I got that email

Lol they're complete opposites - that must be so odd swinging back and forth like that!

[inafrozenworld]

Thanks! I'm really glad you think so :D

Lol I've got to throw a Kuro-schatzi into this somewhere now! And have Kurogane accept it without asking what it means xD

[goldycowcow]

someone also said something like this, but i have a friend like his brother, and i am more like fai here. this is actually very easy to relate to! i have a similar situation going on with my friend, not murder, but painful separation and guilt.

i love how you describe fai crying; it is so real and raw. i felt as panicked and sad as he did when i read it. ;;

this is a wonderfully emotionally charged chapter. i loved it. ;; i just hope fai will return after going home. poor kurogane, his place will be so messy without fai...

[inafrozenworld]

Lol he'll soon start realising those pizza boxes don't just disappear themselves anyways xD Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! And I'm so pleased you felt it was emotional :D I wasn't so confident in this one so I never expected it to make any sort of impact!

That must be hard :( and so weird to read. I'm surprised to hear it - here I thought I was being melodramatic but it turns out quite a few people can relate to what I wrote!