Your fic has a most excellent balance of emotions; comic relief in lines like "Besides, Jesse Lacey was a fucking god at pinball." keep things from getting overly angsty. That said, this was angst done really, really well. Not the kind of angst where it's like "HE DIDN'T CALL ME OMGZ I MUST SLIT MY WRISTS NOW" but the perfect kind of real angst.
You made me feel bad for Adam. Jesse is accusatory and Adam comes across as so defensive, so nervous. Your attention to detail is spectacular.
Also, because no one else has, and I really have to... Adam ought to be used to burning sensations by now. Herpes!
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Your fic has a most excellent balance of emotions; comic relief in lines like "Besides, Jesse Lacey was a fucking god at pinball." keep things from getting overly angsty. That said, this was angst done really, really well. Not the kind of angst where it's like "HE DIDN'T CALL ME OMGZ I MUST SLIT MY WRISTS NOW" but the perfect kind of real angst.
You made me feel bad for Adam. Jesse is accusatory and Adam comes across as so defensive, so nervous. Your attention to detail is spectacular.
Also, because no one else has, and I really have to... Adam ought to be used to burning sensations by now. Herpes!
Sorry. I'm sorry. I love you.
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