Comments | in_myy_veins: you can't choose what stays (and what fades away)

singyouhome in in_myy_veins

you can't choose what stays (and what fades away)

Jun 05, 2012 14:51

title: you can't choose what stays (and what fades away)
rating/word count: pg/876
summary: Why do you always have to be in love someone? - she stares at her reflection in the mirror, swallows the ashes in the back of her throat, and pulls together a smile
notes: I haven't written in so long. I miss it, soo much.

( She feels the misgivings of invisible patterns being engraved into her skin for hours after he's left her side. )

fandom: original, fic

Comments 3

spentnights June 5 2012, 19:33:03 UTC

so beautiful bb! the second section is my absolute favourite, so pretty. <3 && "(it was me. it was me. it was me. -the mantra scraping against her teeth like caramel. )
She rubs her thumb along the counter and stares into her plate of food, cast her eyes away from him. She is starving. Not of food or drink or shelter or need.She is starved of his love." SO PERFECT, i love it.
i'm so glad you decided to post this, it's wonderful Kelsey. :) i've missed your writing so much. <3

singyouhome June 6 2012, 03:40:30 UTC

aww thank you so much much honey! you are wonderful. I miss the days when we were writing all the time and I'd get sooo excited when i'd seen you written something. like my heart would flip-flop in my chest, because I knew you were gonna break my heart.

thank you always for your amazing feedback.<3

spentnights June 7 2012, 00:57:54 UTC

i honestly love you so much. you're not only a wonderful writer but a great person, you always make me feel awesome tyvm that's one of the nicest things anyone's said about me. <3 we need to get lots of writing done this summer, hopefully! i know i'm gonna try. :)