FIC: Butlers Know Best 1/1 Rating:G Fandom: Batclan

[in_excelsis_dea]

Title: Butlers Know Best
Rating: G
Summary: Jason receives an unexpected visitor one day and learns a lesson in humility.
Disclaimer: Jason and Alfred don't belong to me. I'm simlpy borrowing them for the moment.
AN: First time writing Jason (or Alfred, for that matter) so any comments/constructive criticism would be appreciated.

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Comments

[stalinglim]

I would like a sequel as well! this was really good!

[in_excelsis_dea]

Thanks! As to a sequel- I'm considering it. And the fact that a certain scene won't leave my head tonight is definitely speaking in favor, so, um, we'll see- but currently, yes, I am leaning towards writing one...

[in_excelsis_dea]

Thank you! I enjoyed writing them both.

[cavaleira]

Oh Alfred, what would the Bat-family do without you?

Both your Alfred and your Jason we're wonderful in this, I really enjoyed it.

[in_excelsis_dea]

Oh Alfred, what would the Bat-family do without you?

First and foremost, starve. Then live in filth, forget to do simple tasks and eventually all move down into the Batcave and live like the (real) bats that inhabit it, I'd assume...

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

[1_900_mimicry]

Oh, this was sheer awesome. Very glad I got pointed in the direction of it.

I love your Alfred, and the way Jason describes Alfred.

And really those last few lines were the best ever. I'm still chuckling, and that's making it hard to review.

Just wonderful, really.

Deathdays made me snort. Oh, Jay. That's so very *him*.

And hiding the guns before Alfred could say anything, and then what he *did* say.

Hee! I'd love a sequel, but this is already more awesome than I was expecting in one day.

[in_excelsis_dea]

I think I'm caving on the sequel. So, yeah. You might luck out.

And thanks!

And really those last few lines were the best ever. I'm still chuckling, and that's making it hard to review.

*grins* I'm very glad. Especially since those were the lines that worried me the most, initially.

I'm glad you liked Jay and Alfred. Jay is one of my favorite characters and Alfred is so freaking classic. It was a blast to write them and even if I don't do a sequel to this, I definitely plan on writing more of them.

[amarin_rose]

Hee! Alfred needs to take charge more often; things would be a whole lot better in the Batclan for it.

[in_excelsis_dea]

I agree. *grins* Forget Batman, Alfred is the true ruler of the roost. And the Bats should never ever forget that. Thanks for reading!