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fic: Shell Shock [Iron Man/NCIS]

Mar 25, 2009 18:35

Shell Shock
(alt-title: 'Is That a SIG-Sauer P228 In Your Pocket, or Are You Just Happy to See Me?')
Iron Man/NCIS
Tony Stark; Tony DiNozzo

big thanks to general_jinjur for the beta; props to bellwings for some NCIS canon-checking. ♥

( 'Is that really necessary?' the suit asked. It had a freaky electronic voice. )

Comments 28

basric March 26 2009, 01:01:24 UTC

I love NCIS and this cross over was very good. I enjoyed it. And the byplay between them was right on.

aphelant March 26 2009, 01:40:01 UTC

Thank you!

shusu March 26 2009, 01:21:55 UTC

I KNEW I LOVED YOU FOR A REASON.

er. sorry. Loved DiNozzo trying to *arrest* him, and the maniacal laughter. But really once I get over the awesomesauce of the eye-fucking, I really, really liked the contrast of their ideas of justice.

They're going to run into each other at a society shindig, right? ;D

aphelant March 26 2009, 01:53:58 UTC

I thought of you after I wrote this, your love for both Tony Stark and NCIS being legend. :)

once I get over the awesomesauce of the eye-fucking

Eye-fucking through a glowing blue visor, even! Oh, boys.

I really, really liked the contrast of their ideas of justice.

Yeah, Iron Man didn't go to that warehouse to capture bad guys like Tony did, he didn't even go to save NCIS. He went to exact revenge. I think that might be why I like Iron Man as a hero, he's got personal and immoral motivations. *pets him*

They're going to run into each other at a society shindig, right?

Oh yes, dressed in suits or tuxes or something, and they flirt outrageously over crab cakes and champagne flutes. askfsjlkaj;ljk GUH.

tesserae_ March 26 2009, 01:32:50 UTC

Oh, brilliant.

And that was when the shooting and screaming and crunching started.

This is such a great detail. It really captures the moment when Tony realizes the suit is not an hallucination. Really nicely done... and yeah, slashy enough that I'm already seeing the sequel!

aphelant March 26 2009, 02:07:09 UTC

Eee, thanks!

slashy enough that I'm already seeing the sequel!

Mm...Tonys face-to-face... (not writing it, though; I couldn't flirt my way out of a paper bag, much less make two others, who are experts in their field, do it. D: someone should write it, though. seriously. waaaant!)

dragonwrangler March 27 2009, 01:55:24 UTC

Love it! You really got DiNozzo down here-- I especially like the Wizard of Oz reference (cause yeah, Tony would definitely think of that) and Rule #33 and #11, lol! Also liked the "Well, they might not all be dead,". XD

Thanks for sharing!

aphelant March 29 2009, 03:22:52 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

meredith44 March 29 2009, 03:19:30 UTC

I was checking this out when compiling the newsletter (as you didn't include the pairing or gen when sending it to the Gmail address) and I got sucked in. I really loved it, especially Tony's monologue and the interaction between DiNozzo and Stark. Thanks for sharing!

aphelant March 29 2009, 04:14:59 UTC

Ack, sorry! That would have been a helpful detail. :(

And thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :D

meredith44 March 29 2009, 04:48:27 UTC

You were not the only one who did not mention a pairing. Out of the 13 fiction entries tonight, 4 didn't have a pairing listed. (And at least you had a header, unlike two of the others.)

And, in a way, it was good, as I haven't been able to recently take the time to read much, and I really enjoyed this. :)

aphelant March 29 2009, 04:57:29 UTC

So...my negligence had a positive outcome? \o/! Well, that's my good deed done for the day. *dusts off hands*