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190. {c} [suits] (harvey/donna) six degrees of separation [2/prologue+6+epilogue]

Jan 21, 2013 05:42

six degrees of separation ; r ; 2,475 words ;

what's gonna kill you is the second part

they aren't okay but they'll both pretend anyway

a/n: this is for abvj who donated to fandomaid

( He figures if their gazes lock long enough that someone will notice; he sees Donna tongue press against her cheek and he narrows his gaze in preparation. )

pairing: suits: harvey/donna, fandom: suits, rating: r, character: suits: donna, fic: suits: 6degrees, fic!chaptered, character: suits: zoe, character: suits: harvey

Comments 4

chll51 January 21 2013, 14:56:58 UTC

jesus. how do you write like this? you managed to capture the unresolved sexual tension between Donna and Harvey so well, especially on chapter one and the way he reacts to his dress and his irrationality in this chapter where he's too involved with Donna, instead of Zoe is just perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter :D

enemeriad January 28 2013, 11:19:18 UTC

I WANT TO KILL MYSELF ( ... )

onlywordsnow January 28 2013, 11:23:27 UTC

I feel like this is a predominate point in the entire fic:

"Donna," he mutters huskily.

She lightly shakes her head, her fingers sliding down the length of his barely clinging to the tips; "you have to stop looking at me like that."

"I know," he agrees, "I don't mean to."

"Then you should look away," she tells him.

He purses his lips together, tongue absently sliding from one corner to the next, "Monday morning, expect a different man."

"I expect the same man," she advises, "just one who is less obvious."

just_liv February 15 2013, 04:05:38 UTC

"So, how did you enjoy the show, Harvey?" Donna presses.

You bitch, he thinks

There are so many things I love about this story, but this was simply so incredibly poignant.

ALL THE AWARDS for this perfect characterization.