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imsanehonest

Wasteland (7/?)

Mar 28, 2008 12:15

Title: Wasteland (7/?)
Characters: Ten, Martha
Word Count: 4,029
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine. *sniff*
Spoilers: Up to “The Last of the Time Lords.”
Summary: The Doctor receives the phone call that sends him running back to Martha Jones, but all is not well with his former companion. What begins as a reunion for the travelling partners ( Read more... )

martha, fic: dw, wasteland, ten/martha, doctor who, ten

Comments 7

persiflage_1 March 28 2008, 19:32:43 UTC

This is good stuff !

I particularly like this:

“It’s perfect!” she said, gripping the arm of his jacket in excitement. “They would know who I am, and now that they’ve seen you and have the TARDIS, they would blatantly be searching for me. And I’m expendable.” She smiled, giving his jacket another tug. “It’s absolutely perfect!”

His hands were suddenly on her shoulders, their coolness making goose bumps form across her skin, and before she could register that she had been moved at all she was in front of him, his eyes locked on hers. “You’re what?” he asked, tone as stern as his grip as he looked at her.

But it wasn’t the Doctor’s typical, disapproving glance, the one that could make gods and demons quake in its intensity, that could shame the most proud and that had the power to usher in the destruction of a world. This stare was different, a look that she had never before received from him, his eyes boring in to hers with a heartbreaking sadness that almost made her stagger with the power of it.

because this is very good

csg1 March 28 2008, 20:28:59 UTC

You should've seen me when I saw this on my flist. I love this story, and this chapter was funny but at the same time completely gripping. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)

nycjoc March 28 2008, 21:48:28 UTC

this is a very intense story. I love it. I like the way you bring up so manay dynamics between Martha and The Doctor. I always become gleeful when you update.

offthebalcony March 29 2008, 01:43:15 UTC

Eeeeeeee ♥ This is awesome.

& this?

He smiled. “You still good at running, Miss Jones?”

“You know me,” she remarked with a good-humored pitch. “I love running.”

IS MAKING ME GRIN LIKE A FOOL AT MY COMPUTER SCREEN =D

00sophie March 29 2008, 05:23:14 UTC

Wow! I love the scene where Martha say's she's expendable. Well done. He says everything that he's supposed to at that moment and he says it with his gaze.