155 - Le Barge, Chapter 3

Feb 11, 2011 16:36

[Private to Iago]

We will talk, and we will talk civilly. Is that understood?

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At long last, my lovelies, a new chapter. My book on my early life, and eventual arrival here, finally continues. I invite those that have read the first and the second chapters to grant me their critiques and questions. A much longer sampling, but this part of the ( Read more... )

tell me how awesome i am!, writing, the barge book, iago, tales to tell

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Private inhumandog February 11 2011, 22:29:17 UTC
Yes, sir.

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Private impure_tale February 11 2011, 22:50:04 UTC
You are sober?

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Private inhumandog February 11 2011, 22:53:39 UTC
Yes, sir.

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Private impure_tale February 11 2011, 23:16:22 UTC
Good. Having taken time to calm yourself, how do you feel about Major West's departure?

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darknessb4me February 12 2011, 00:11:51 UTC
[...hn :(

Well, it's too late for either of them now.]

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doctor_j_crane February 12 2011, 00:53:28 UTC
The history of these asylums is quite interesting. I've always believed that we can learn from the past in that regard.

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impure_tale February 12 2011, 01:50:40 UTC
I hear they're considerably improved in your time, but that is said of every time.

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doctor_j_crane February 13 2011, 03:41:50 UTC
That all depends on where you go, doesn't it? Each era has its own spectrum of good and bad places to be institutionalized.

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impure_tale February 14 2011, 06:59:51 UTC
Having seen both, I cannot truly remark on the differences.

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rass_bestie February 12 2011, 01:11:08 UTC
That… awareness. I'm sorry for it. [Because that's the thing that haunts him out of the piece.]

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impure_tale February 12 2011, 01:51:25 UTC
So am I.

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fanged_aleera February 12 2011, 01:53:05 UTC
There were no bobbins in this one.

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