Grey Sedan

[improper_me]

I see a slightly rusted grey sedan parked on the corner as I drive by. It sat there in front of that nondescript bungalow every morning. It was never there at any other time. Not at noon, supper, or late evening, but always in the early morning. It was there when I left for work every morning and that was it

Comments

[eska818]

I love the "aha" moment of this piece. :)

[improper_me]

Thank you :) I am glad it came across clear enough

[mistearyusdiva2]

I so know the feeling when our inquisitiveness gets the better of us to the point of irritating us and making us more curious .... :) I loved the simple answer to whole mystery created by the slightly curious and questioning mind ... A nice and light read :)

[improper_me]

I thought it could be an easily relatable experience.

[roina_arwen]

Aha! Newspapers - that makes sense.

[improper_me]

So simple yet not the first conclusion that springs to mind.

[kehlen]

A very interesting unraveling of the story.

[improper_me]

Thank you :)

[halfshellvenus]

I love (and understand) the obsession with needing to solve this mystery, which actually became stranger first before it became simple.

Very well written, and great use of the prompt. :)

[improper_me]

Thank you, this prompt was a tough one and I was hoping it would at least tangentially relate in the end haha!