FMA Fic, "Mother Arc: Chapter 12", Roy/Ed, PG-13

[impishclawmarks]

Haven't heard back from the beta, so I'm going to go ahead and post...

Title: Mother Arc: Chapter 12
Author:dragonimp
Rating: PG-13 for swearing
Genre: Family saga.
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Warnings: End of series spoilers
Summary: "if it's bothering you that much, why don't you go apologize?"
Notes: AU movie, part of the "Waiting" thread and the "Mother Arc". "

Comments

Thanks for updating

[greeniron]

I really like this series and your characterization of Ed. I'm glad Roy's mom is starting to clue in a bit because otherwise it was just too frustrating. Thanks for updating so we could read some more of the story!

Re: Thanks for updating

[dragonimp]

Definitely time for her to start getting a clue :D. I didn't want it to happen too soon, because that kind of thing can take a while, but yes, it was time.

I'm glad Ed rings true for you, it can be so hard to mature characters believably ^^.

[lelann137]

wonderful addition. I loved the fight, well done. thanks for sharing

[dragonimp]

I was so worried about how that damn fight would come off, too, I write fight scenes so rarely ^^;;. Thanks!

[tenshishanai]

Oh my goddness.. I have waited for THIS!! I was so courious how Roy would react to what Ed had said to Yu...

So good XD thanks a lot ^^

[dragonimp]

Roy still doesn't know EXACTLY what Ed said, and somehow I don't think Ed's gonna tell him...

Glad you liked it ^_^

[tiercel]

Yay! This is a wonderful update; I much prefer Ed's mature side and I'm glad Yu is starting to see what makes Ed special.

[dragonimp]

That side of Ed had to come out sooner or later ^^. He's just... had a hard time of it until now.

Thanks!

[semipertinent]

Ahaha, I think Yu is about to find out what Family (capital F) means to Ed. It's like the mob, once you're in, you never leave. >XD

[dragonimp]

Ain't that the truth XD. Ed takes family seriously!