Lawrence of Arabia: Lawrence/Ali

[imperfectcircle]

carmarthen says jump, I say what colour?

For Mel with love, on the occasion of every 18-year-old in the world being younger than her. She got in on the right day.

Comments

[carmarthen]

So creepybeautifulbroken. Especially love It was one thing to steal his soul, quite another then to discard it.

(Why did he kill the woman? *dumb*)

[foreverdirt]

*squee!* Thank you! It makes me very happy that you like it.

(They were out in the desert - he couldn't afford to carry her with him - she was going to die anyway. He just put her out of her misery. Or possibly he just killed her because he's a psycho. *g*)

[carmarthen]

I thought that might be it! The former, not the psycho.

[afrai]

omgsmooshdie.

Any one line would of been enough to kill me DEAD, but this one:

Ali wouldn't let him throw the paper on the fire. It was one thing to steal his soul, quite another then to discard it.

Oh, wow.

WRITE MORE FIC. LIEK, NOW.

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[foreverdirt]

*beams* Thank you! I'm looking at the screen through heart-shaped pupils very glad you liked it.

[derryderrydown]

Oh, lovely! You've really caught Ali here. *is happy*

[foreverdirt]

*is happy also* Thank you!

[painispretty]

*beams* I knew I should have friended this damn journal.