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[imopectore]

Feel-good, one-off.
Cheesier than ever. ^^

“Hey Bells, mind to give a hand?” I called after you.

You stopped, turned around, looked at me and cocked your head aside and oh my, didn’t you just pout? As how well I knew you by now I wasn’t surprised, rather scared, when that devilish smile crept upon your beautiful face.

“So, where do you want it

Comments

[dolce_piccante]

aawwww!! what a lovely little story! this was so sweet...your matt and dom were so playful...sneaky matt :)...i loved the general feeling of affection between them....very warm and loving and cute...i laughed at a few of matt's more drama queen moments, about the cold water and not having a towel...you definitely portrayed him as an adorable, pouting cutie...and i love dom's nurturing, caring personality...great job! <3

[imopectore]

Wow, hahaha. Thanks a lot! =D
Your comment really made me swell! :b
Ha, portaying Matt as an adorable, pouting cutie as totally my pleasure! ^^
Thanks again! <33

[xanium]

Awww cute! And sexy of course :P

The ending was hilarious!! lol really made me giggle! Well done :)

[xanium]

Oh PS: you are very good at smut, esp if this is your first one!! More please :D

[imopectore]

Wiie hahaha, now I'm blushing really! LOL
I'll try and write more (if I can actually handle it myself and not get blown away!).
Thanks for your comment! Means more than you think! ;) <33

[xanium]

XD Good to know ;P

Yay!! If you ever want any help, I'd be happy to (read it before everyone else)...er...beta it :P I'm such an addict hehe.

Of course! I'm so sorry I didn't comment your other ones :( For that I have no excuse *kicks own ass* Lol. And I never got to say properly "Welcome to Museslash!!" *hugs* XD

[imopectore]

Hahaha, yes thought about that as well!! Thanks for commenting, I really love it!! =D ^^ <33

[allwithwings]

This was wonderful, so playful and sweet. And you don't have to worry about smut writing - you're very good at it!

The dialogue was really good, you've quite a knack for it there. Just really natural and fun :)

[imopectore]

Wow, I don't know if I should take it as a compliment that I'm good at smut writing, hahaha. Or wait - I think I take it as a compliment. Yes definately! :b And about dialouge - I guess I can just see them so well before me, acting like that. XD Thanks a lot for commenting! Made me blush really! <33

[semi_shadowed]

This was so sweet! You portrayed them as having such an adorable way with each other, I really enjoyed reading this :) keep writing!!

[imopectore]

Portaying them as I WANT them to be, haha!!
Thanks a lot!! =D Hope to write more soon too!! <33