Changes

[imogen_penn]

This was written in response to a challenge over atdhr_challenge. I, unfortunately, did not get it in on time. Happily, seems like no one else did either! So here it is. I'm interested to hear some feedback because I found this very very difficult to write. I hope you like it!

Title: Changes
Challenge: dhr_challenge #3: The Party has Just Begun
Author:imogen_pennRating: PG

Comments

[floorcoaster]

This was truly delightful! You did an excellent job with the prompt! It had me laughing in parts, but it was also touching. I'm glad Draco wasn't over-the-top, trying to impress or anything. That he didn't want people to think he'd gone through some enormous transformation. I bet it felt really good for Hermione to say she didn't want things to change.

Again, great job! As for concrit, I think having a beta run over this would really polish it, catch the tiny mistakes here and there (punctuation, mostly, was what I saw). It's truly well done, thoughtful, and sweet, without being too much of any of those things. :D

[imogen_penn]

Thanks! I must admit, I didn't spend as much time editing this one as I have other, due to the deadline. Is there anything specific you caught, so I can change it? I'd really appreciate it!

[kazfeist]

Really nice! I never knew this was here! :D