FIC: Maneo (S/R, PG13, Interluda)

[imochan]

Title: Maneo
Author: Imochan
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG-13, for Sirius's potty mouth, and boysnuggling
Summary: Through the night, and into the morning.
Notes: Part of the Interluda Series. Follows directly after the events of Amissus and Censura, where James's parents have died, and the boys hit the part of the emotional roller-coaster

Comments

[rynne]

Oh. Oh, Imo. It's so raw and poor Sirius and poor James and poor Remus and poor everyone. Wah. I love you. *can't be more coherent*

[losselen]

Yes. Poor everyone.

<3

[musikologie]

Awww... boysnuggling!

I loved how Remus kept coming back to the fact that they were children, because that's been something that's been haunting me for days. Sirius just always seems so young, and I don't think it's because he's immature, but because he's just not all grown up. A supremely awkward stage. Which you write beautifully.

And I firmly believe that fevers, headaches, bizarre rashes... all help the creative writing process. Mmmm yep.

[devkel]

Yes. Well.

You're Remus continues to be the Remus that OWNS MY SOUL!

Seriously, I don't know how you managed, but you broke my heart about 354134 times with this. Sirius is so perfect, angry and hurting and lashing out. Remus is BRILLIANT, no surprise. Sweet and honest with himself, even when it hurts.

And how 'bout THIS:

It is the most awkward, beautiful moment of his life, to see dull London street lamps reflected on the tears rolling down Sirius's face

Wow, Imo. Just Wow. You certainly know how to put me in there with them. Ughag. The way they cling to each other. I can't even begin to give you a coherent review. Just know that this was amazing.

[setissma]

SEE, I TOLD YOU IT WAS BRILLIANT.