Let's Get It On

Oct 07, 2008 05:26

Let's Get It On
Jaejoong/Yunho
NC-17 - porn/humour/fluff. 8D
1500w approx.
For mcdoherty who wanted me to write awkward!sex in return for... something else. ;D ♥

yunho confesses. awkward sex ensues. )

fandom: dbsk, pairing: jaejoong/yunho

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blinkable October 7 2008, 04:54:06 UTC
It was so good ROFL!!!!
Definitely one of the best bed scene ever for me *woot*
The fact that they just adjust to each other so much made up for all that is lost~~
Is there a sequal on how they finally learned the real thang? 8D

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immodicus October 7 2008, 04:57:34 UTC
roflmao i'm glad you liked it! it was fun to write. XD hmm sequel, idk yet. ;D thanks for reading♥

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tvxqlover84 October 7 2008, 04:56:25 UTC
hahahh poor boys...
Yunho lets go of Jaejoong and pouts. “You know I’ve never done this before. I was trying to be gentle until you decided to eat my neck for dinner.”
“So did you nearly ripping my manhood off.”
LMAO
And I agree he should have taken ‘The Talk’, my hubby Yoochun sure knows all about it.XD
Thanks for sharing!

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immodicus October 7 2008, 05:00:07 UTC
roflmao, yoochun could have given them some good education. ;D thanks for reading!♥

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kattan69 October 7 2008, 04:57:52 UTC
This is funny...never seen this kind of version before...making them suck at sex....hahahaha *-*

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immodicus October 7 2008, 05:01:12 UTC
XD! i'm glad it was amusing! thanks for reading♥

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mcdoherty October 7 2008, 05:00:24 UTC
I DIE.

i didn't even notice the pairing until after having read the first line? lmao my brain was still all hazy that you'd dedicated it to me in the first instance XD

THEREFORE, PERMIT ME PLEASE TO EXCLAIM:

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ILU SO MUCH WTF!!! ♥

i assumed what with you having written it it'd be yoosu but seriously, how perfectly suited are these two for this premise?! failjoong ilu <3 and yunho is such a sweetheart, so sincere in his attempts and then it all just falls apart spectacularly ugh I LOVE IT. I CAN'T EVEN. EVER AGAIN ( ... )

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immodicus October 7 2008, 05:05:13 UTC
JAEHO JUST FOR YOU♥!

roflmao ah lauren! i'm so glad you liked it. you make me want to write jaeho forever, which sure is saying something. maybe i will try it more y/y? 8D

jaejoongh says you should watch his solo! XDD but really i'm just glad that the fail was fail in a good way and that you liked it♥

NO ILUMOARTHANIDO!

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mcdoherty October 7 2008, 05:16:08 UTC
WRITE THEM FOREVER. IT IS A SPLENDID IDEA!!!!

or atleast, just. MOAR.

NGH. I CAN HAS.

jaejoongh says you should watch his solo! ORLY? ;DDDD

baby. 'fail in a good way' pretty much sums up jaejoong's general existence, thus, you got his characterisation spot-on and thus, OFCOURSE I LIKED IT! ♥

lmao i totally just read it again. yunho's willingness is so endearing i can't actually stand it! broken. my life is.

*dies*

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xiahtic October 7 2008, 05:03:11 UTC
OH

MY

FUCKING GOD

WRITE THEM FOREVER

I'LL LOVE THEM THEN.

YES I KNOW I SAID THIS IN IM

BUT IT'S TRUE SDJKHFSJKLDFHJKSDHFKJSDHFJKSDHFJKSDHFJKSDHKJFHSKDJFH

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immodicus October 7 2008, 05:06:19 UTC
I MIGHT HAVE TO. I ENJOYED WRITING THIS. D: *waves byebye to yoosu?*

......yeahright. XD GLAD YOU LIKED IT, BB! ♥

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