(potentially unfinished) fic

[immicolia]

Okay, okay, okay. I wrote this for the anonmeme but haven't posted it there yet because I'm kind of neurotic about the ending and I actually do have Thoughts on having it go a bit further but I'm not actually sure if they'll work or if I should leave it at this or what

Comments

[northwind_gale]

it's because Ivan is the Pearson and Pearson is always dead ever ;-; also I just can't help but see Edward's terrified face when he shoots the woman and then see it change to utter horror when she shifts into Ivan and falls dead and AGGGH. that is like the only thing I would have you add if you could ;-;

H-hhm, that IS a good question, omg. Because Yuri seems to be one of those people that thinks that death is the ultimate solution.

B-B-But this ending oh my god. It's the perfect place to leave off even. AAAH.

[immicolia]

Ivan is magically both Pearson and Rick due to being a total loserface who is hopelessly devoted to his accidentally murdering ex-con boyfriend..... and oh my god, I should add that. I don't know why I didn't think of it myself. Edward's facial expression in that scene makes me go "oh, sweetie, let me give you a hug. You didn't mean it, I know you didn't mean it," as it is.

And yea, I'm just insanely waffling on it. Because on one hand: boner for murdering murderers. On the other: has he ever actually gone after someone truly remorseful and willing to accept ultimate, fatal, responsibility for their actions. Except... he did go and off braindead!Maverick. Then again, Maverick pretty much fucked up his own mind as a big final middle finger to everyone anyway and certainly didn't feel guilty. Not that Yuri would know that.... Or maybe he did, I guess the whole thing did get broadcast.... And as such I go back and forth. XD

[northwind_gale]

do it do it please it would make me so happy

Maybe you should post it on the anonmeme as it is and see what people say about it. Although the prompt is so old idek if people will react to it, huffffff. But yeah, actively waiting for Lunatic to off him does throw a wrench into the whole thing and I DON'T EVEN KNOW EITHER.

[immicolia]

I'm probably going to edit in that bit first and then post it (although it will probably be like the other three things I posted there and maybe only be noticed by one person tops XD) I'll probably put it on AO3 too so it might get more actively noticed there. I really need to stop being lazy about putting my T&B fic on there anyway. I still haven't updated "Faking Normal" due to the lazy. XD

[7th_rock_alien]

I like this ending, but at the same time I want to see MOAR. Maybe Yuri takes him home or something. 8U

[immicolia]

Yea, I've already posted it at the anonmeme as is and the OP loved it the way it was. But the part of me that inexplicably craves Yuri/Edward like burning pretty much wants Yuri to take him home and keep him as a broken little guilt-ridden pet or something. Because I am a horrible person. 8|

[7th_rock_alien]

DO IT. DOITDOITDOIT!