Fic: E is for Energy - Stargate SG-1 - Friendship Alphabet Soup

Nov 04, 2014 09:30

This fic was written as part of the Stargate-themed Friendship Alphabet Soup. You can find a collection of all 26 stories here.

My challenge was a story about Daniel and Skaara, and the letter E. I chose ...

E is for Energy )

stargate the movie, daniel jackson, skaara, michael shanks, sg-1, stargate, fanfic

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madders_ahatter November 9 2014, 14:55:39 UTC
Way to go! Give me a lovely heartwarming story - then rip my heart out with that last line!

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immertreu November 9 2014, 17:06:45 UTC
I'm sorry! Can I give you a hug?

Somehow Daniel and love are the two words that always cause even more heartache. I couldn't help myself.

Thank you for reading. :)

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sg_fignewton November 9 2014, 15:26:22 UTC
Oooh, this was good. I do wish you'd ended the story a sentence or two earlier, though. :)

It makes sense that Daniel, in the aftermath, might have doubts and half-regrets. How lovely to think of Skaara helping him work through it!

I adore Abydos, and I love what you've done here. Thanks so much for participating in the Soup!

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immertreu November 9 2014, 17:11:36 UTC
Oh dear! Uhm, I'm sorry? ;-)

Daniel is always good at doubting himself, so I thought it only natural that he would overthink things on Abydos. I'm glad he had his new family to help him through it. I imagine Sha're kicked him out of their quarters because she was tired of him moping around that day, and sent Skaara after him to make sure he's okay. Or something like that. lol

Thank you so much for reading! :-) And I'll definitely be back as a cook. (But first I need to read all the other wonderful stories of this Soup. I'm still stuck at B. Oops.)

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aelfgyfu_mead November 9 2014, 22:35:31 UTC
I was already thinking of Daniel looking at the pen in "Forever in a Day" and talking about how amazed Sha're would be at it before the last line. Knowing what will happen always makes stories on Abydos bittersweet. I like this moment between the good brothers.

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immertreu November 10 2014, 19:20:50 UTC
"Forever in a Day" kills me every time. Sniff. Daniel and Sha're would have deserved a happy ending.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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zeilfanaat November 10 2014, 12:14:44 UTC
Oooh, I like this story!
Great portrayal of both Daniel and Skaara.
And I love how you made the lighter into more than a piece of memorabilia.
Great job! Thanks for sharing!

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immertreu November 10 2014, 19:22:53 UTC
Thank you so much! I'd never written Skaara before so it was fun to explore his character more.

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annieb1955 November 12 2014, 02:24:26 UTC
Lovely, lovely story. There's a real bond between these two, which made future events so heartwrenching.

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immertreu November 13 2014, 19:01:55 UTC
Thank you so much!

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