Mess - GenRai Holiday fic

Nov 22, 2007 18:07

^__^ So,
Read more... )

raidou, smut, fanfiction, answers, genma

Leave a comment

Comments 18

itcomesinphases November 23 2007, 04:33:10 UTC
That. was like. watching porn.

The not-so-perfect sex was perfect and real. and hot.

Reply

imlikat November 23 2007, 04:59:42 UTC
Thank you so much!

XD I actually started stressing about this the minute after i posted it, because I didn't obsessively edit it first, and I'm kind of nuts that way. But I feel better about it already, because that was *exactly* what I was going for. I love, love, LOVE not-so-perfect, slightly awkward sex, and this pairing seems to beg for it.

Thank yoooou!

Reply

itcomesinphases November 24 2007, 07:03:31 UTC
NO

THANK YOU!

<3

Reply


shikyaku_nj November 23 2007, 06:13:28 UTC
I am so in love with your hot RaiGen... I love their unusually slippery grind (aaaahhhhhh!!! you killed me with that..), the fear of getting caught, the sensual awkwardness, the tasssty finish (Raidou really is such a nice friend!)... All of it.

I can. not. wait. for more.

<3

Reply

imlikat November 23 2007, 06:52:31 UTC
^__^ Thank you! Mmm, yes, frot. I always have to have frot, don't I? It's become almost second nature at this point :D

Yessss, raidou is a very nice friend. I want a friend like that. XD

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

imlikat November 24 2007, 08:26:45 UTC
hehehehe. I love kitchen counter sex. *hump hump* And Raidou swallowing... I didn't mean to do that, but it was like - the Raidou in my brain wanted to, and I couldn't write it any other way. XD

You know, I think we both drink from the same porn river or something, because I swear we share smutty brainwaves sometimes ^__^.

Reply


crimsoncourt November 24 2007, 07:11:51 UTC
*Jaw drops*

First, HOT as hell. Second, I love your ability to intertwine what should be pure porn with something entirely more meaningful.

Reply


crimsoncourt November 24 2007, 07:17:19 UTC
...........

hit the wrong bottom.

Like I was saying...you have an uncanny knack for tricking me. I don't know what it is, but I'm always suprised when there turns about to be a deeper meaning to your work. It might just be my AFF training to expect PWP right off the get go... Anyway....look forward to be surprised/blown-away soon

Reply

imlikat November 24 2007, 08:29:08 UTC
XD ha ha I tricked you! I really try to write pure pwp sometimes, but the part of me that needs a little bit of plot or meaningful interaction to make porn good usually sneaks some in past me. XD I don't mind, really.

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up