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Heat Wave (Part Five) - Unfair

Jan 30, 2009 19:59

Title: Heat Wave (Part Five) - Unfair
Series: Bleach
Pairing/Characters: Akon, Nemu, Rin, Mayuri (Characters by Kubo Tite)
Warnings: -
Notes: I haven't written fic in awhile. I thought writing some Akon would help me ease back into it. Heat Wave (Part Four)- Tired - Kensei/Shuuhei
Summary/Excerpt:
( Akon had never seen the other Captains as many times in his entire service as he had in the last week or so. It was irritating. )

akon, bleach, rin, kurotsuchi, nemu, mayuri

Comments 7

simply_day January 31 2009, 02:13:02 UTC

LOL! This was brilliant, funny win!

....the freezer. XD

And heeeeeee drinking the captain. It might have been interesting if Rin actually did.

You write Nemu very well, which is awesome, because I consider her exceptionally hard to capture.

Awesome!

imladra January 31 2009, 03:06:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. I've had this lying around for a bit and just didn't get around to posting it.

And Nemu...I'm happy to hear I did well with her. It's the first time I've actually had her say anything, and not just mention her in passing, I believe. :)

And the freezer...I almost forgot. I was hoping you'd like that. XD I couldn't resist!

hu3long2 January 31 2009, 02:31:50 UTC

Love this-- totally out of the left field, the punchline! I had wondered vaguely what you mean when Akon was complaining about Kurotscuchi's way of keeping cool, and when you disclosed what Rin was about to drink, it all came together! And Akon going into the freezer... and Nemu kicking him out-- that girl doesn't have a sense of humour but has the knack of appearing totally hilarious to others!

Ah... liquid Mayuri... Rin is insane to even think of drinking-- it's the most obscene colour of green!

imladra January 31 2009, 03:03:16 UTC

I know! Who would ever find liquid Mayuri appealing? Rin was the only choice. XD

I really wonder where my ideas come from, sometimes.

I also think Nemu is often unintentionally funny...mostly because she is so humourless.

And thanks! I've missed writing fic. I have an idea for the next Heat Wave...hopefully it'll pull me out of my slump or whatever it is!

hu3long2 January 31 2009, 02:32:54 UTC

Me again... forgot to mention... welcome back! I've missed reading you!!!

some_scribbles January 31 2009, 20:24:13 UTC

Heeeeeeeeee!

"Yes. You almost drank Captain Kurotsuchi."

Likewise heeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Aww, this was great fun, Cat. I loved the detail about the pen freezing. Poor Akon. Nemu is just jealous he thought of it first.

imladra February 1 2009, 01:41:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy to have actually managed to write fic. And I do like this one. XD The other chapters of this are more serious...and then...this. I just couldn't help myself!