Fic: save your breaths (Remus/Sirius-ish, warning for general doom, death, and destruction)

Aug 12, 2007 01:54

Around midnight, I said goodnight to the shoebox chat, fully planning to go to sleep. ...and then I looked at a barefootboys prompt. It's not like I could sleep when I had an idea, right? Also, I had an insane amount of fun writing this, because I am mental and enjoy writing violent things until-- oh my God, it's 2 am. GOOD NIGHT.

~580 words. For prompt #8 (Read more... )

barefootboys, remus/sirius, harry potter, fanfiction

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jedusor August 12 2007, 08:14:31 UTC
Ow.

That one hurt.

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imagines August 12 2007, 12:26:25 UTC

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youokayhoney August 12 2007, 17:31:25 UTC
Ditto.

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faeriepunks August 13 2007, 00:48:58 UTC
*wibbles*

THAT WAS LOVERLY AND SAD.



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imagines August 13 2007, 01:28:11 UTC
Thanks. :D

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sweety167 August 13 2007, 04:52:57 UTC
Oh, that was beautiful, sweet and painful. So perfectly them really.

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imagines August 13 2007, 06:05:48 UTC
Thank you very much. :D

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kalamnity August 13 2007, 07:39:01 UTC
Ouch ouch ouch. That really was magnificent. Particularly liked the first paragraph and the third, just stunning imagery and beautifully described pain.

You are marvellous XD

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imagines August 13 2007, 15:07:53 UTC
Oh my goodness, thank you! ^___^

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shinzuku August 13 2007, 19:12:16 UTC
"Images of Sirius are going off like flashbulbs behind his eyes. Insanely, he thinks rats. I was worried about rats and now I'll never smell rat-breath again."

That's sad.

"He pours his terror into Remus"

I liked that line.

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imagines August 13 2007, 19:43:34 UTC
Thanks for all your comments! :D They made me happy.

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