Prison Break fic: Beyond the Walls of Fox River

[imagineforever]

Title: Beyond the Walls of Fox River
Author: Miss Court-A-Doo
Rating: PG-ish
Pairings: Michael/Sara
Genre: angst/fluff
Summary: Michael did it; he broke his brother out of Fox River. See how this affects Sara Tancredi.
Warning: Um... angst abounds? Post escape (obviously), minor spoilers through 1x19 “The Key”
Disclaimer: I don’t own Michael or

Comments

niiiice

[heartagram_lala]

are you going to continue? it would be awesome if you did, and even if you dont, i still loved it!

[accrues]

Wonderful! You write so well - especially for a first fic! Nice :)

Is this it? Or will there be more chapters?? :)

[miss_mazzie]

But she’d learned the hard way that he was just like every other guy in that prison. A criminal with an agenda. == Oh, that's harsh, Sara!

believing that they could have something more that the horrible prison life they’d chosen. == Oh, interesting. Are you saying she realizes he's not meant to be there? That he's chosen to be there? I don't mean chosen as in decided to rob the bank and got caught. I mean it like she knows he's not supposed to be there.

The men within the walls of Fox River generally had no hope. But he did. == Well, you know what despair.com says about that. "I've found the cure for hope." (Sorry, but sometimes I just want to smack Michael for all of his optimism. It makes me crazy!)

grabbed the shot of Morphine. She didn’t feel in the least bit tempted == Heh. Michael's stronger than morphine? Somebody better slap a Class II controlled substance sticker from the FDA on him and put him under lock and key!

(Just one thing, they don't use glass syringes anymore, so it wouldn't have shattered.)