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imaginary_iby

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Nov 14, 2006 22:56

Well, this here I'm quite proud of, for some reason.

It's Ziva babysitting Lila, but not as strange as it sounds.

( Love Always, Jethro. )

kidfic, lila, abby/gibbs

Comments 15

abby_forever November 14 2006, 13:28:23 UTC

That is soooooooo cute. I freakin love it.

Abbyforever

imaginary_iby November 17 2006, 12:28:54 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)

indigoblue4ever November 14 2006, 13:46:24 UTC

Love! Much, deep, loving love. Thank you for another update so soon.

imaginary_iby November 17 2006, 12:47:05 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Yes, the muse is a ravenous beast, who gobbles up words bor breakfast, lunch and tea.

kalliekat November 14 2006, 15:53:13 UTC

Oh Lisa, gorgeous!!!! "shutting her mouth, she looked down and dug her toe into the grass of the sidewalk 'this is another one of those times, yup?'" i can not only hear Abby saying it, i can see her face as well, the kind of i suppose it's okay but i'm not sure and i need you to tell me it's okay look.
quite brightened my afternoon!

imaginary_iby November 17 2006, 12:47:53 UTC

Thankyou! If it mananaged to brighten your afternoon, then my work here is done.

:)

wiccagirl24 November 14 2006, 16:58:41 UTC

Okay, I was having kind of a crappy morning. Traffic, not enough sleep, etc. And then I got to work and spent a few minutes going through my flist, and found this.

So perfect! I love Gibbs warning, and Ziva talking to the baby, and her catching Abby and Gibbs making out (thanks for that visual.) I love the bit at the end the most .

your dad would probably be the most dangerous man on the planet if anybody ever tried to hurt you. Your mum would be right beside him too, crazy lady that she is. We wouldn’t be far behind though. Tony, Ducky, McGee, Jimmy, Jen and myself that is.

Thanks for brightening my day!

imaginary_iby November 17 2006, 12:48:53 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy you liked it. Yeah, I'll have to write a Jimmy fic with Lila, he'd be too cool for school.

Visuals are nice. :)

dragonessasmith November 14 2006, 18:38:38 UTC

Aww! (I think I say that at least once every time I comment on your fics. ^^) I loved it all, especially Ziva trying to babysit, and the line “I’m talking to you. I can’t believe I’m talking to you.”

imaginary_iby November 17 2006, 12:49:28 UTC

Aww is good! I encourage the AWWW!

Ziva rocks my socks, so I'm glad you liked her in this.