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Nov 30, 2011 19:30

Author: imaginary_iby
Title: Cars and Compromises.
Rating: G.
Warnings/Spoilers: None, whatsoever.
Summary: When Steve finally kills Danny's car, they embark upon a quest to buy a new one. Hijinks ensue.
Author's note: This is my first Hawaii Five-0 fic, so please be gentle with me! This also turned out slightly crackier than I had originally intended, many ( Read more... )

fanfic, steve/danno, hawaii five-0

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simplyn2deep November 30 2011, 09:19:11 UTC
awww!

that's so like exchanging wedding rings because he already has the key to Danny's apartment.

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imaginary_iby December 1 2011, 23:25:16 UTC
:D I'm glad you liked it.

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indigocat November 30 2011, 09:46:18 UTC
Love the story, but I think Steve will slip back and get the Impala.

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imaginary_iby November 30 2011, 09:54:14 UTC
Now that's a visual I am totally down with. :D

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michele659 November 30 2011, 11:25:40 UTC
This was very funny and perfectly in character! Steve tries to control every part of Danny's life(after all,every part of Danny's life is his too :))so of course he'd have to be involved with the choice of the car.
I couldn't stop laughing at the bickering and the poor salesperson's reaction to it(mentally calculating the distance to the security alarm,lol).And the word spreading across the island's car dealerships that had the salesman thinking of calling in sick to avoid them,and the mass email that suggested the comment the dealer used to get them to buy the car was hysterical.
And Danny giving Steve his own key was so sweet!
Thanks for putting a much needed smile on my face!

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imaginary_iby December 1 2011, 23:32:39 UTC
I'm glad you thought it was in character, this was my first H50 fic, so I was a bit nervous.

Glad it made you smile! :D

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tkeylasunset November 30 2011, 13:12:24 UTC
This? This was a work of art!!! Security alarms. Mass emails. His own key!

Perfect!!! And may I just say - poor Danno. He has a hard life! (But in the best way possible.)

More please?

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imaginary_iby December 1 2011, 23:32:56 UTC
Heh, I'm really pleased that you liked it! :D

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imaginary_iby December 1 2011, 23:34:03 UTC
Got to have the Supernatural love. ♥

Yup, it totally needs to suit them both. :D

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