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[imaginary_iby]

Well, this is the final chapter of A Second Chance.  I might do some side-stories, but I'm not sure.  Perhaps a series of drabbles from each character's perspective.

He’d seen her body prepare for death; seen her blood spill out from her and onto the pavement, into his jacket and over his hands.  He’d heard her breathing hitch and gasp and slow down

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[imaginary_iby]

Thanks! I'm not quite done with this idea; I'm going to take a deeper look at Mann and how she and Gibbs handled the way things worked out. I also think I'll do a set of drabbles or mini-fics, each focussing on a different character, and have them interact with Abby while she's in the hospital or recovering. McGee and Ziva were sort of neglected in this a bit.

That's very kind of you! I'm realy glad you enjoyed the story and please, feel free to poke around the journal.

[dragonessasmith]

How come everything you write is so good? :)

“I know you’re looking down my shirt, Gibbs.”

He raised an eyebrow. “My shirt.

Just lovely.

[imaginary_iby]

Hehehe, thankyou!!!

If only Gibbs would look down my shirt!

I....can't believe I wrote that! Oh well! ;);)

[rebellious_love]

*wipes tears* I loved how you worked in Emma at the end. It especially worked with this:

Gibbs was long past the randy teenager stage of his life, but it was just that sex with Abby was so very good. It was mostly an appreciation for her body; not in a way that ignored her mind, but rather in a way that was thankful for the fact that beneath her pale skin, blood circulated and air flowed. He’d seen her body prepare for death; seen her blood spill out from her and onto the pavement, into his jacket and over his hands. He’d heard her breathing hitch and gasp and slow down and he’d stared into her eyes, eyes that had lost their focus, as the mind controlling them slipped into darkness. Quite frankly, the warmth of her skin was something he wanted pressed against him at all times.

Loved it!

[imaginary_iby]

Well, with four wives, I'd say Gibbs isn't impartial to sex.

Thanks, I'm very glad you liked how it turned out.

[kalliekat]

*sniffles* you have the most amazing way with words. and a brain which has amazing fic plots! this is so beautiful! i'm sorry too it's finished! i could have read on and on. *hugs*

[imaginary_iby]

Hehehe, not really. This sort of plot is tried and true, but I'm glad you think it was expressed eloquently.

Well, I have some side stories plannes, so we'll see!

[plutos_revenge]

Hi!
This was a lovely fic. I thought your character portrayals were spot on & I'm looking forward to reading the mini-fics from other characters povs.

I've been reading some of your other fic too - Lila is adorable! I love how you've written Gibbs & Abby as a family yet again kept them both very much in character. I hardly read any het fic, mainly slash & the odd bit of gen, but I'll definitely keep reading your fic.

Thanks for sharing :-)

[imaginary_iby]

Thanks very much! I'm really glad you think that the characters in this, and in the Lila stories, are accurate portrayals. That's what I strive for, so cheers!

Also, you have great interests! NCIS, Stargate SG-1 and Doctor Who are some of my absolute favourite shows.

Little question - your username, does it have anything to do with Pluto being demoted?