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Mar 27, 2007 11:09

I ummed and ahhed about the end of this story for a while, but found that I'd done all I could.

Abby and Gibbs fight over what should be done with Kelly the boat.

Burn. )

kidfic, lila, abby/gibbs

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a_million_names March 27 2007, 01:31:00 UTC
yay! Another fic! I only saw one little thing: Abby fished a big clip out of her pocket and pinned the longer strands of her fringe back. It wouldn't be fringe, in the US we call them bangs. I've never quite understood it, Fringe actually makes more sense.

love the story, and the idea.

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imaginary_iby March 27 2007, 02:00:05 UTC
My sister and I had this big debate about what exactly bangs were. She said it was a side fringe; short bits on the side of the face, and I said it was your word for fringe. Either way, I still forgot to put it in the fic!:)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Also, your Josh/Janel icon! I must have spent a scary amount of time watching that clip!

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a_million_names March 27 2007, 13:51:06 UTC
Amen to that. My mp3 has video, and it's on there. I swear, I am so much like that 15-year-old that she was talking about. It wasn't me, but I wish it was.

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rebellious_love March 27 2007, 02:19:27 UTC
He laughed, but signed back.

Yay! I love the story, including Lila looking like a starfish.
The grin on her face could have powered the boat to Australia.

That was great too.

I'm sorry about the burn. I got one once on my shoulder and that was painful and beyond annoying...

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indigoblue4ever March 27 2007, 11:08:47 UTC
Very sweet, and really nice to see what actually happends to Gibbs' boats once they're finished.
Sorry to hear about the sunburn, although i have to say, it is as good as self-inflicted. Us fair skinned people KNOW to wear sunscreen. I hope you're less crustation-like soon.

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imaginary_iby March 27 2007, 11:19:42 UTC
I'm very pale, but normally I'm not outside long enough to get burnt. I walk to and from places, but that's about it. The forcast was cloudy and showers, like the day before, but then suddenly and surprisingly the sun came out and attacked me. Trust me, I take cae to avoid sunburn. I had a hat and sunnies on. :)

Well, we never figured out where the boat went, did we? Cheers!

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brightillusions March 28 2007, 03:22:26 UTC
I loved it! I love how very in character this is and the beautiful Australian touches you add.

As always it's perfect. =)

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kalliekat March 30 2007, 12:17:44 UTC
oh it's such a nice ending to the boat. and Lila like a little starfish - i can so imagine it. and tony and fingers and sockets..... yup!

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