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[imaginary_iby]

I'm not sure what to think of this one.  I sort of like it, and sort of don't.  I wrote it a while ago, ummed and ahhhed over it and decided against posting it.  Then I found it again this afternoon, decided that maybe the sentiments explored in it were worth a shot and revamped it.  So here it is!  :)

“Sick.”  Abby flopped onto the bed gracelessly

Comments

[wiccagirl24]

Squee! This was awesome. Love the hand thing, and the history of Gibbs as a child/Gibbs as a Marine. The eleves comment cracked me up, and the sports equipment made me laugh out loud.

I'd read kidnap!fic. I have a weakness for kidnappings.

Don't worry at all about the beta'ing. Real life always comes first. So does your mental health. When ever you have a chance is fine. It's just something I wrote because I wanted to try Ducky as a central character. There's no deadline (okay, yes there is. Before Christmas would be cool.)

Hugs!

[kalliekat]

when i was pregnant it would have been wonderful to have someone bring me ginger tea and crackers, or do the hand thing. lucky Abby. and it's a great fic. and go for the kidnap why not? you put such a different slant on things, it will be good!

[brightillusions]

Uhm. Love. I like the way your Gibbs/Abby talk to each other. The imagery and all that. I'm so jealous.

[indigoblue4ever]

So cute, and I love in innuendo. The kidnapping thing has been done to death, besides, thats pretty rough on Gibbs, to face losing another daughter. However, if you want to, I will read.

[a_million_names]

Adorable as always.

I agree that a kidnap!fic has been done up to the death of it, but I would read another version of it. And, besides that this would be Lila, we know Lila. Personally, if I know an OC already I'm more attached to them.