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[imaginary_iby]

Well, I wanted to write something sexy.  As I don't write smut, this was an endeavour to write something hot, but purely through description, rather than action.

It's G, which I know doesn't sound promising.  I don't really know how to describe it.  Just please tell me what you think.

Comments

[abby_forever]

That was so sweet. I know what you mean about writing smut, I can't do it either. I have gotten pretty close but just can't.
It was very sexy without being incredibly sexual.

Gotta love Gibbs.

Great job love. Happy writing.

Abbyforever

[imaginary_iby]

I just can't seem to write smut. I read it every now and again, but it's just not my cup of tea.

Sexy without bing sexual! That's what I should have put in the intro; good job!

Cheers!

[kalliekat]

lovely Lisa, another caring side of Gibbs! like you, I can't write smut, i can read it, and enjoy it, but not write it. but this is lovely, and i love both view points!

[imaginary_iby]

Ta, m'dear, I'm glad you liked it.

Yeah, no smut writing ability here.

[a_million_names]

I'm not a huge smut reader so I really liked how this was set up. Kinda different ubber cool.

I don't think ubber is even a word.

[sycophantic15]

uber (u = an umlaut - the u with the two dots on it) is a german word that has passed over to english and it basically means 'super'.

hey iby :) i cannot belieeeeve that you made me wait so long for more of your fantastic gabby writing. i was dying here. Perfect as always. Sooo cute.

[imaginary_iby]

Aren't you just a fountain of knowledge!

I wasn't feeling inspired, and then I saw Twisted Sister and the first season four kiss, so I got my act together.

Cheers, la!

[sycophantic15]

omgomgomgomg theres a gabby kiss? i havent seen it yet, cos dont get season 4 till, i think, next year :( youtube is my friend.

glad you were re-inspired :) if by 'glad' i mean 'forever-grateful'

[indigoblue4ever]

G rated sexy, I like. Nicely done, well described, great visualisation.

[nyc_iby]

Merci! I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure if the actions were expressed very well, so you've put me at ease.

[brightillusions]

Absolutely beautiful. The images, and the emotion. I loved this. And it is not smut, it's beauty. =)

[nyc_iby]

Squee! Coming from you that means so much!