{Fanfic} Heat

Aug 14, 2008 18:19


Title: Heat
Length: Oneshot, short. Total PWP.
Author: ilusmbb 
Pairing: Changmin/Yoochun
Rating/Warning: R/NC-17 for explicit adult material and homosexual themes
Summary: Hands slide over wet flesh, hot from the fires that burn low in their bellies - the near-boiling water that pounds down on them seems almost tepid on their feverish skin.

AN: This whole ( Read more... )

yoomin, fanfic, dbsk

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chaosmyth August 15 2008, 01:33:48 UTC
The glorious (lol wtf) Hoshi takes first spot XDDDDv

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chaosmyth August 16 2008, 11:29:05 UTC
and I'm hereeeeee, finally 8DDDDD

LOL, what can I say? You know I love this *_______*

First, top!Min dfajsdjsfa;ashdfhsa;adgsjhfasjfdfsjas!!!! *dies*
I LOVE THAT SO FUCKING MUCH OKAY?! *o* I like Yoomin both ways, but I think I like it slightly better when Min tops and you wrote it so. fucking. well *_*

And shower!smex it's one of my biggest kinks too, so this fic put together two of my favourite things and just, gahhh *w* Your descriptions are awesome, bb, I could just feel the heat and the passion and *dies*

YooChun loves the feeling of the younger man inside of him, of Changmin's swollen cock, hot and hard, pushing him towards the edge and into pleasure so intense he sees stars and thinks that maybe he's died and gone to heaven, or perhaps to hell, because no angel could be as sinfully beautiful as Changmin is when he bites back a strangled cry and comes inside him.THIS LINE. OMFG *_____ ( ... )

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selgalad August 15 2008, 01:57:44 UTC
it's the true spot-_-'

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selgalad August 15 2008, 02:14:58 UTC
THAT WAS AWESOME!!! one of the best nc-17 fic i've read recently!!! *_____________________________*
and i was supposed to go to bed and sleep peacefully >_> i want this as my wet dream now xD

Fingertips brush against each other in a kiss more intimate than the ones they shared in the heat of their shower, and they know it will be enough to tide them over until their next stolen moment.
this is a great last line! (i'm looking forward to their next stolen moment xD)

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emda August 15 2008, 03:13:25 UTC
this is gorgeous!!!!! beautiful and hot smut. Love it. going to my memories for sure!!!!!!!

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music3chick August 15 2008, 04:43:27 UTC
Ha, who said that Changmin couldn't top? *sings* He's not that innocent.

Nice descriptions... *fans self but passes out*

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machine_of_july August 15 2008, 06:42:29 UTC
PORN.

PORN.

PORN.

I love me some porn, especially when it's of the DBSK variety, especially when it features top!Min, cause he's just kinda all sorts of awesome. And in a shower ohgodyes. Fuck him Min, yeah, do it.

YooChun loves the feeling of the younger man inside of him, of Changmin's swollen cock, hot and hard, pushing him towards the edge and into pleasure so intense he sees stars and thinks that maybe he's died and gone to heaven...

Uhhhhhhmmmmm ♥♥♥

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