Fic: "Not Yet Dawn" - (TIME: Dawn)

[illuins_lair]

Title: ”Not Yet Dawn”

Author: illuins_lair

Fandom: Lotrips/rpf

Pairing: Elijah (/Orlando) - Elijah´s POV

Rating: PG13? For uh.. pillows?

Summary: Elijah doesn´t really sleep, it wasn´t really a kiss, and Orlando doesn´t really know.

Warnings: Pillowy pillow talk. Seriously. A little denial-angsty? I don´t understand warnings anyway. Nobody dies, ok.

Comments

[lisabellex]

You're a great poet, M, and this is marvelous. There's so much beauty here, and it's all the more effective and poignant for its fleeting and transient nature, as seen through the eyes of your disconnected Elijah.

I love this!

*hugs you*

:D

*overwhelmed*

[illuins_lair]

omg THANK YOU!! So happy that you liked it!!!!!!

I´m always scared that my writing is too weird and quirky (this one started out as quite!contented and ended up in uh..angsty!pillowtalk) =D and it´s so goddamn hard to try finding the right feeling to it.. the right words.

It´s lovely that you find it poetic! Uh, or ME... *squee*

*dresses up in moustache and french beret*
*note to self: buy Absinth*

[anatketani]

Yep, Orlando is a wanker. Poor Lij.
Thank you! This was beautiful and angsty in all the right places. :)

[illuins_lair]

Awww.. Thank You for reading and finding it beautiful! *draws pillow-hearts*

Orli is maybe a wanker. Or maybe both of them are. Or maybe they´re not. *makes clingy orlijah-jump* Weeeiii! Angstiness-mess..

*smooches tenderly*

[i_o_r_h_a_e_l]

Oh, dearie. This is so lovely and amazing. I love it.

A first-last-only kiss

Goodness.

[illuins_lair]

Oh thank you sweetheart! Weeei!! Happy that you enjoyed reading and liked this. *mwhah!*
Turned out a bit more angsty than I expected but I guess "first-last-only-kisses" can be quite hard to handle =)

*draws hearts with angst-free!first kisses inside, for Wee!family*

[randomdarling]

This is truly beautiful, and poetic, and lovely, and deep, and even sad.

Your descriptions are so wonderful - "crumbled skies and hesitant stars, the paleness of not-really-morning and not-yet-reality." It's all perfect. :)

Your writing is quirky, and I love that - it's a breath of brilliant fresh air.

*loves you and this*

[illuins_lair]

Oh my sweety.. Thank you so_much for loving the quirky sides of writing *happy tears*
...and Poetry!whore in me is making happy-dance now.. =D

I´m always nervous about if what I intend with it can come through, or y´know if I manage to deliver what the muses want. (And I have some quirky-assed!muses I tell you) =D If only myself understand it, it´s not good. (or if I don´t understand it either) lol

*hippie-smooches to celebrate the quirkiness*

*loves you back unconditionally and crazy*

[krazykitten46]

That was so stirring. Watching Elijah try to bury the feelings one minute and relish them the next. Such a fight going on.

[illuins_lair]

Awww! Thankyou so much for reading & giving fb-lurve! *draws hearts*
Yes!! That´s exactly what I thought too; the struggle within - turning out quite angsty and confusing. *gulp*
I sincerely don´t know what´s going on exactly, my Elijah!muse continue to confound me. *bites nails* Was supposed to a cute little first-kiss-drabble...yep, and see where I end up LOL

*adores your icon*
Adorable little kitty-kitty... *ouch!* =D