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illithrien

Tainted Chapter 17

Sep 12, 2007 19:38

Chapter 17

“Ville!” the queen cried, “Are you out here sweetheart?”

Both men pulled away with a gasp. Ville stood up and spun around so quickly his head spun, “At the gazebo mother”

At the sound of the queen’s footsteps, Bam’s fingers fumbled with his buttons, his extremities shaking more and more as the steps got louder.

“Ville darling, I have the ( Read more... )

Comments 6

joijoy September 12 2007, 11:22:35 UTC

Your 1st Vammy sex scene was HOT! Congrats on that!lol! I have to say I am really hating the Queen and of course Joanna!lol! What are they going to do?! I love how you didn't even have them react to the wedding news...yet! I love this story and cannot wait until you update next! Please update soon! =D

kattygirl68 September 12 2007, 16:58:51 UTC

MMM so hot.Good job.

kattygirl68 September 12 2007, 17:00:07 UTC

Looking forward to the next.

lillithvalo September 13 2007, 02:43:18 UTC

YAY!!!

OMG
YAY!!!!
You did great!!!.. That was beautiful....
I can't wait for more

illithrien September 13 2007, 02:50:00 UTC

hehe thanks ^.^ glad i didnt screw up and kill everything :P more should be coming in the next few days.. i've almost finished the next chapter already :)

You did awesome! dl_val September 13 2007, 14:06:34 UTC

You did perfect. Though I add, it made me miss my own lover. lol That was like deja vu too, I usually react like Ville with the, 'Please what?' lol I love your story, tis one of my favorites! And your firstie sex scene has become my favorite! lol So I bow to you! *bows* Bravo!