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Aug 31, 2010 18:21


Adultery )

fanfic, sherlock

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warriorbot August 31 2010, 20:51:19 UTC
Oh wow - the little flashbacks are /so/ compelling (and hot!) This line here:

"[he] met his gaze steadily because John Watson didn’t run from anything"

made me drum my hands on my thighs it's so good!

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illezabeth August 31 2010, 22:20:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, it's really been a while since I've written anything fanfiction, but now I've started I've got ideas streaming out my ears! XD

"The line here..."
Haha I'm glad that line went down well, I liked it but wasn't sure if it wouldn't be too corny!

(I really need to get a thank you icon from somewhere lol, oh and confused!John icon is actually adorable.)

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warriorbot August 31 2010, 20:57:18 UTC
BTW - why is this not on 221b_Slash?

http://community.livejournal.com/221b_slash/

What's the point in me trying to get all the finest BBC!Sherlock slash under one roof if it's missing out on awesome like this.

Get your ass over to the comm right now missy and cross post!

Please... If you don't mind? (God I'm a rubbish top!)

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illezabeth August 31 2010, 22:22:47 UTC
I'm sorry! It will be soon I promise, I just need to figure out what it's actually going to be called (I'm thinking Adultery at the moment?) and it still needs editing so I'll probably do that tonight ^_^

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warriorbot August 31 2010, 22:35:30 UTC
Ohhhhhh - well if you want me to beta instead of just fangirling (though the two may be indistinguishable this is so good!) then I'll happily do so - tomorrow evening?

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illezabeth September 1 2010, 00:07:15 UTC
Tomorrow evening would be fabulous. A second opinion is always indispensible so if you don't find I'd be extremely grateful- I only have chocolate fudge cake to pay you with though I'm afraid...

(What have we said about flattery? Everywhere my dear, everywhere)

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ginbitch September 1 2010, 11:53:31 UTC
Loved this! You get the barely-suppressed violence of Sherlock beautifully. And John shuffling about is perfect. Really beautiful writing and the sexiest flashbacks I've ever read.

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illezabeth September 1 2010, 12:25:58 UTC
Aww thank you! I haven't posted it to a comm and I've already had two people tell me they enjoyed it. *big cheesy grin* Don't feed my ego any further, I may not be able to keep it in it's cage at this rate XD x

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ginbitch September 1 2010, 12:48:39 UTC
That's it! I'm friending you in case I miss any future such gems! Not posted yet to comms indeed.. (-; Don't feel you have to reciprocate!

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illezabeth September 1 2010, 13:23:56 UTC
Haha thank you, I wouldn't worry too much though - a lot of what I post is stylised rubbish (or proclamations of boredom)!
I'm just waiting for this one to be beta'd and giving myself a few days distance before I edit it myself, it will be on the comms eventually! XD

Well tough, I'm going to anyway ^_^.

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how_to_shine September 1 2010, 23:01:14 UTC
grah, just wonderful - really nicely written and so in character, I love it.

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illezabeth September 2 2010, 08:59:49 UTC
Grah - a technical term? XD

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ^__^

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butnotdrowning September 2 2010, 12:01:22 UTC
Gorgeous writing. Very concise, no superfluous words. And very hot flashbacks!

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illezabeth September 2 2010, 14:32:21 UTC
Thank you for your lovely comment ^_^ and I'm so glad you enjoyed, like I said it's been a while on the fiction front, it's good to know I haven't backslid too much XD

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