[FIC] One Thing

[ilkanta]

If there’s one thing that Joey hates, it’s Seto Kaiba.

Okay- Joey hates tons of things, too many things, but Kaiba just kind of hits the mark, takes the game, bats it out of the ball park and then some. He’s just that kind of arrogant, self-important prick that sometimes you just gotta punch into the ground, fists and all- if not for, you

Comments

[chibiveggie]

I LOVE THIS!!! its so in character. :D

[ilkanta]

asdklj Thank you!

[ilkanta]

Fff aksdj thank you very much, I was worried about how Joey would come across but I'm happy that it's in-character, it's always weird the first time you write something. The duelling thing just sort of- worked itself in? I'm really glad you liked it, though!

Joey insists that the force field has great power- kind of like Kaiba has an ego so huge it has it's own gravitational field.

[arien_elensar]

omgyouaremadeofwin! :D
Now this was belivable. Not only was it well written but it's actually true. You've spoken what Takashi implied between these two in the series. Putting this into words shows even more so what a thin line there is between what we see in the series as shown in your fic and something more. I'd really love to see where you go with this. :)

[arien_elensar]

Wops... I menat "Takahashi"

[ilkanta]

omgyouaremadeofwinforlikingthis! :D

Haha, thank you very much, really. I'll definitely take this- somewhere- eventually- with time. I'm... horribly lazy. xDD; But again thanks very much and I'm glad you liked it!

[arien_elensar]

lol You're welcome! :D And even more thanks to you for writing. Another cool thing to mention would be how, not only is Kaiba with his brother "wierd" but also how he's building a Kaiba Land for kids. Both times this is mentioned in the anime (during the first virtual world arc after Duelist Kingdom and at the end of Battle City as Mokuba and Seto leave for America in the blue eyes jet Mokuba mentions it) Jounouchi silently acknowledges it. Jounouchi could cover by thinking it is Kaiba only wanting to make more money like the greedy bastard he is. Just a suggestion though!
I await the next segment patiently. :D

[introsquirrel]

YAY! I liked it! Joey's voice was awesome, by the way. I hate fics that make him a pansy, and you didn't make him one at all. And the style of it just seemed to fit Joey really well. Kind of ADD-ish and jumpy, I just really liked it. :D Oh joy for fics where nothing happens! *skips away humming to self*