The Harbour...Chapter 63: Let's get ready to rumble...

Sep 09, 2016 00:32



Earlier that day

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Marco frowned.

The 1955 Porsche Spyder was parked in front of his gate, his fiancée’s ex husband leaning against a rear fender.


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marco d'angelo, carolyn garcia, the harbour, kyle harrelson

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mlek13 September 9 2016, 11:47:24 UTC
Please! Like Marco wouldn't know the answers to those most basic questions about Carolyn. Not only have they known each other and been friends for years, Marco's been in love with her for ever. He'd definitely know the basics. Try harder Kyle! (Ugh . . . Kyle.)

As I was reading the earlier chapters I couldn't remember if we saw how this went down or not. It was nice to see the scene. I thought in the previous chapter Kyle and Marco were giving different accounts of how they ran into each other, so I had to go back and see who was lying. For a minute I thought Marco had to lied to Carolyn about where they met and I was trying to figure out why he would do that. Then I realized I misread. He said after the gym, not at the gym. Oops. I'm relieved. lol

Wow! I never noticed before, but Marco has really nice arms. That working out is paying off. :o

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ilikefishfood November 7 2016, 04:15:06 UTC
You really do know Marco well! :-) He didn't go into all the gory details with Carolyn, but he didn't lie either.

So you noticed his beefiness eh? *wink* *wink* I've always tried to use Rabid Angel's clothing meshes for him, as they are a little fuller in the pecs and biceps. I think you're just really noticing because of the outfit and how he's standing. Suffice to say, Marco is all kindsa hawt! :D

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anonymous September 11 2016, 12:50:35 UTC
Okay Marco, here's your trophy! FINALLY he takes Mr. Ego down a whole bunch of notches. What an insufferable idiot. Someone ought to bottle him and sell it as bear spray.

This is so satisfying to read! I love the interaction. You capture the emotion between so perfectly too, the shots set up just right, sunlight, the way Marco leans into the car (that's right, get into his space). Wonderful chapter!

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starling_1 September 11 2016, 12:51:41 UTC
Well damn, LJ logged me out and I didn't realize it (again). Comment above is mine.

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ilikefishfood November 7 2016, 04:17:00 UTC
Totally knew that was you! You do have a way with words. You've got me grinning all over the place with your feedback. Thanks for the props. This was absolutely my favourite chapter so far...both to write and to photograph.

You rock!

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