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eileen0001 April 15 2012, 02:19:34 UTC
I really, really want to pull her hair right out (Nina, I mean).

Talk about airing one's dirty laundry in public...this is waaay too harsh. Clingy much, Nina?

That said, Carolyn needs a break, Marco. At least, you owe her that.
[Awesome job, once again another great chapter. Can't wait for more]

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ilikefishfood April 15 2012, 03:48:20 UTC
Ha haaaaaa! Upset much?! :D

I'm lovin' how emotionally invested you are. This is what writing is all about!

It's great fun playing/writing for Nina. There are totally no limits!

Thanks so much for the feedback!

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mssugah May 3 2012, 03:11:35 UTC
I must say, I commend Marco for refusing to let Carolyn run out the door. I LOVE that he held her there by saying over and over again, voice shaking, “It’s not what it looks like. It’s not what is looks like. It’s not what is looks like.”
That was greatness! And the fact that Carolyn didn't flee for as upset and horrified as she was by Nina's antics...WOW!
THAT was really something!
Speaking of, there's a nasty little corner in hell for the likes of that evil monster!
What a pathetic, slithering, evil snake she is!

Please tell me Nina will get what's coming to her and that my beloved Marco and his precious Carolyn will have their happily ever after, Lady T. Please???

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ilikefishfood May 3 2012, 03:26:53 UTC
I'm really impressed with the umber of adjectives you've come up with to describe Ms Caliente! Mwah ha haaaaaa!

Let's see what happens! [insert dramatic music here]

PS) Oh yeah, our boy was totally romantic *siiiiiiigh*

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mssugah May 3 2012, 19:39:54 UTC
I have way more adjectives for her, but since this is PG-13, I thought I'd keep 75% of them to myself. ;)

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ilikefishfood May 3 2012, 20:20:27 UTC
I'm totally scandalized! Ha haaaa!

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etisen March 6 2013, 15:44:54 UTC
I should hate Nina, but I love her! She might be crazy, but she's my type of crazy. She's forcing Marco and Garcia to behave contrary to how they would have in the past. I really love the way Marco pulled Garcia in and told her it wasn't as it seemed. He's really grown and I'm enjoying this new demanding Marco.

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ilikefishfood March 6 2013, 16:01:24 UTC
Nina is a blast to write for. There are absolutely no limits. I thought Marco's reassurances were soooooo romantic...and you're absolutely right, in the past they'd both have run away without talking about what was going on. Yaaaay for personal growth!

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