MGS/Doctor Who fic Pt.2: "The Man From Gallifrey"

[ikipud]

Title: The Man From Gallifrey
Pairing: Big Boss/Kaz if you squint really hard
Rating: G
Word Count: ~2,200
Summary: Part two of this fic. The Doctor manages to keep his promise and comes back for Snake, though not as promptly as he'd have liked.
Notes: Okay so this idea has grown like crazy since I started so here's the next part. It's kind of boring; a

Comments

[oudeteron]

Aw, I know you were unsure about it, but I actually liked the exchange between The Doctor and BB & Kaz - it shows bits and pieces about their characters without having them recount all their backstories, and I think you got their interaction quite nicely. Also, Kojima cameo for great justice (and I thought it was pretty meta that he referred to Kaz just by name even though he's a recruit, since it's like he's talking about him as a familiar character).

“What? Seriously?” Kaz's eyebrows shot up again, then his expression turned into an exasperated frown as he held up his hand. “Okay, fine. This is ridiculous, but I guess I believe you.”
WHY CAN I PICTURE KAZ DOING THIS SO WELL.

“A Timelord ?” said Snake. “But you look human.”
“You look Timelord,” he quipped.This is epic

[ikipud]

Aaaa thanks. I'm so glad I got them to sound in-character since I really couldn't tell any more >< Ahaha I didn't think of it like that but I guess that works too XD

Hurr hurr I actually stole the "you look Time Lord" line from the series. They've used it a few times so I couldn't resist :B

Ah yeah I see what you mean. I might try and rewrite that bit to make it fit better (I think I rushed it a bit compared with the rest of it). Thanks :B

[cherrytruck]

[ikipud]

Pfff yes he does that a lot actually. Haha I couldn't resist some delicious meta :B

Yeah I'll probably mention the thing about the TARDIS's automatic translation thing later, though I think it's safe to say that in 900 years of travelling through time and space that he'd have time to learn a few languages lol.

And yes. Yes there is. I'll get to that later XD

Well, the Doctor was only gone three days because he was busy the whole time catching dinosaurs in the same timeline. Bad things can happen if there are two Doctors and two TARDISes in the same timeline, that's why he couldn't have gone back earlier to meet them just after he'd left - he would have overlapped with himself. (Okay yeah, time travel stuff hurts your brain.) Most of the time he doesn't screw up and manages to bring people back around the right time and place. It's only when there's important stuff happening e.g. alien invasion, that the TARDIS goes off on its own.

Ffff I'm tl;dr-ing again. BUT ANYWAY. THANK YOUU <3 <3