Comments | ikilledkennym: MSCL Fic -- "Hospital Music"

ikilledkennym

MSCL Fic -- "Hospital Music"

Dec 05, 2007 18:33

So I finally made a Rickie icon. I needed one. Sensitive guys ftw! ANYWAY...

Fandom: My So-Called Life
Pairings/Characters: Jordan/Rickie, Katimski
Rating: PG, swearing
Prompt: Hospital at msclfanficWord Count: 1881 ( Read more... )

mscl, jordan/rickie, fanfic

Comments 8

badankan December 7 2007, 09:12:51 UTC

My story ^_^ I Love it! Must read it again : )

lalagirl33 December 8 2007, 01:58:18 UTC

It's beautiful. YOu captured both of these characters wonderfully. Good job! :-)

celebelai December 14 2007, 12:27:26 UTC

i love this. so much. we need more jordan/rickie around here. thank you!
*saves to memories*

ikilledkennym December 14 2007, 20:16:12 UTC

Yay, a Jordan/Rickie fan! You, sir/madam, rock. :D

Interesting... graylizscorpio April 29 2009, 06:08:03 UTC

I really liked the concept behind this! A year or so after graduation, Jordan is in a relationship with Rickie, but he's still not comfortable with it, or in his own skin. Who were these people at the end, was it Krakow and some girl, or was it just random people who were supposed to be representative of his "straight" days and his confusion? But I think your writing has much matured since this fic; there were quite a few awkward moments in this one. And I'm still not sure I can imagine Jordan and Rickie together. I'd really like to know how you imagined they got to this point you are writing about.

Re: Interesting... ikilledkennym May 10 2009, 03:21:47 UTC

The people at the end... sigh. My subtleness really kills me. It was supposed to be (or not be, but remind him of) Angela, Brian, Rayanne and Sharon. His past basically, or what he would like or find easier to be his past but it's not because they're Rickie's friends. Obviously he still has a lotta regrets, rough past with Angela etc and may not be completely over her ( ... )

Re: Interesting... graylizscorpio May 11 2009, 01:10:00 UTC

ya know, I'd have to read it again to point out the awkward spots...Which I will when I have time. Yeah, I figured the people at the end were supposed to remind him of Angela, Brian etc., but it probably could have been expanded a bit so that we'd understand better what he's feeling at that moment, without it being so straight forward it loses all beauty.

Your explanation makes sense of how they might've started dating. I think it might be fun to explore the hesitation and guilt Rickie might feel for having hooked up with his best friend's ex, but I suppose love could eventually make Jordan more important than some torch Angela might still be carrying. Friends, in real life, hook up with each others exes much more frequently than we might think. Besides, I kinda feel like Rickie liked him first ;).

dairwendan September 24 2012, 10:28:44 UTC

I know I am coming SO late to this, but I LOVE Rickie/Jordan and this is wonderful! Thanks so much for this!