#017; mummifiedmutant

[niles]

Title: Her Opportunity.
Prompt: 10pastryhearts; O T H E R S I D E -- UNLUCKY.
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts.
Characters: Kairi, Pluto, Axel; mentions: Naminé.
Word Count: 241.
Rating: PG.
Author's Notes: Well that's it. I'm finished with my prompt table :) I don't know if I'm totally proud of this, but it's written and I'm posting it... Of all the fics I wrote for this

Comments

[resound]

...I really like this. It's really simple and clean and lovely. But hmmm. I can't...the last line doesn't feel connected to the rest of the story for some reason. I don't know if it's just me or what, but the last one kinda...shoots at left field to me. I really really like it though. <3

AND CONGRATULATIONS ON FINISHING! :D

[niles]

It made sense in my head ^^ Hmm, maybe I'll get rid of it and write something else for the challenge. Hopefully it's not too late for that...

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