B&S Fan Fic - Love Lost Part 4 (Prequel, 3 of 3) - Rated - PG

[ihrtmr]

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[sylviane1967]

Ssssigh. So sad, so beautiful, so heart-breaking. You DO realize that now greedy little me wants more, more, more, right? :D

[ihrtmr]

Yeah, there was no way around the heart break in this one. I wondered if they'd keep in touch, but it just felt like a teenager with non-supportive parents, likely no electronic devices so many years back, and the situation didn't seem like it would realistically have a happy ending.... :(

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[marea67]

Oops, that was my comment, but I was logged in under another alias - (just in case you were wondering what that comment was about. :)
Anyhow, loved it. I think that it was for the best, but, yes, it does make Scotty's anger in the 1st part rather understanable.

I think it is logical that they no longer heard from each other. I can assume Scotty taking some distance from Justin (and therefore the Walkers) and Kevin locking it away as well and soon enough everything would seem like some faded picture from a long lost summmer.

[ihrtmr]

Awe, the way you put it sounds so bittersweet. Perfect description 'a faded picture from a long lost summer'. Love that.

And of course I knew it was you!! Though I know you better as marea, I know you have that alter-ego!! ;)

[samrunning]

That is so sad. It just makes their next meeting all the more sad. For Kevin not to recognize him must have hurt Scotty so badly. Anxiously awaiting their next meeting.

[ihrtmr]

I originally wasn't going to write the prequels, though I 'knew what happened' so to speak. But now that its done, maybe it explains better why Scotty was too hurt to hang around and demand an explanation. He didn't want to lose control of his emotions in front of Kevin...(again)

Thanks for reading,

[laira26]

awww! Kevin and his very annoying brain! He's really a drama queen, come on, Scotty is not so young! lol! although Scotty is too insistent. I have to admit that :)

I love how true are Kevin and Scotty to their characters. I really can see them like this when they were younger.

okay, I can't wait for the happy ending! Very happy now that Scotty was so angry with Kevin when he didn't recognize him. Kevin has a lot of work to do to win Scotty back :)

Thank you for writing!

[ihrtmr]

Maybe I should have made Scotty 16? I didn't want him to be a child tho. That's just perverted... LOL

I didn't mean for Scotty to necessarily be too insistent. Maybe I laid it on too thick? I just wanted this one to have a bit of a love scene and Scotty had to be the one to initiate it since Kevin after all wasn't sure this was a good idea. Yes you're right, Kevin can be annoying, but it comes from a good place. He not only thinks Scotty is young, but he's falling for Scotty and doesn't want to hurt him... :(

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[claire1968]

Oh wow! This is truly turning out to be my favourite fic OF ALL TIME!!!

Gee! You've sure given Kevin the willpower of a Saint: how on Earth could he possibly resist Scotty's advances? I was sure he'd crumble before he took off.

I can't make up my mind whether the prequels are over or not; this prequel seems so...final, what with the kissing goodbye and all, yet I feel as though there should be one more meeting, where Scotty has his 'first time' with Kevin, and it's THAT that makes Scotty so mad when Kevin doesn't recognise him. IDK. I guess I'll just have to tune in again next week to find out lol!

Thanks for writing and posting :)

[ihrtmr]

Tune in next week? LOL, You're hilarious. I love the not so subliminal messages...

Yes, It was very, very, very difficult to resist Scotty. And I flip flopped back and forth on that point, but in the end went with what I originally had intended.

As for Scotty being mad, I don't see him as being horribly mad, more so disappointed. He's been chasing after this fella he likes and has wanted more than a friendship for half a decade and when he finally gets a little attention back from him, guess what? He didn't even know who you were....

That said, there wasn't too much of a reason behind Kevin not recognizing Scotty (well, other than he was in a darkened bar, was drunk and Scotty has grown into a man now) so there's not much of an explanation that can be offered... Scotty's gonna either have to get over himself and forgive it, or no...

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the comments,

[lilypoppy]

Sad but lovely!

I wonder why they didn't stay in touch all these years! Scotty & Justin were/are friends, so what happened? Scotty never came back to the Walker's House?
Have you planned a sequel of Part 1? ;-)

Great story!!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Thanks for writing!

[ihrtmr]

Hi, I hadn't planned a sequel to part 1. That doesn't mean I can't create one, but since I haven't thought of it, I have no idea what happens between the guys