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Apr 16, 2008 11:11

Fic: All That Matters
Author: verloren1983
Read by: bookshop
Length: 17:38
File size: 16MB
Reader's Notes: This was a complete delight to read and I hope all due feedback will go to verloren1983 for her fantastic story.

All That Matters

verloren1983, round 3, bookshop

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sleepingfingers April 16 2008, 16:38:07 UTC
Oh, I love this fic so very much, and the way you've read this is absolutely brilliant. The amount of emotions and the flow of the story that you've managed to put into reading this is wonderful--much better than while I was reading the story in my head. I just love, love the way you've read all the dialogue lines, how you changed your voice according to each of the character (especially how Shindou's yelling all the time--and how his voice's a bit higher than Akira's :D).

At best, he'll lose by seven moku. At worst . . . well, he's just not going to think about it.

The way you've read that is just spot on. I grinned when you paused at "at worst."

"YOU let me murder you and I'M the idiot?"

:D I couldn't help but laugh when you read that out loud.

Shindou's evil grin is back as soon as he hears the involuntary gasp that comes out of Akira's mouth. He pauses for a second and then his fingers brush against the back of Akira's neck again. He laughs at the shudder this causes.The way you read it made *me* shudder. :P ( ... )

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bookshop April 20 2008, 12:51:41 UTC

this is such a sweet comment! i'm sort of totally thrilled and amazed at your mad reviewing skills. :D i had a TON of fun reading this (and i REALLY wanted to kick myself when i heard all the weird not-go-stones clatter in the background, hahaha) and I'm really happy if it added to your enjoyment of the story. Which was awesome. :D

thank you!!!

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verloren1983 April 23 2008, 20:50:43 UTC
It surprised me that you read the disclaimers and stuff, but it was actually fun, the way you said certain things. Though I'm sure that was absolutely on purpose. XD

When you got to the part about Hikaru smiling, I just started cracking up. Then I backed it up and played it again. Because really, brilliant.

And I love Hikaru's screaming. It's so entertaining. And Oh My GOD Akira trying to convince himself that he's not ticklish. *dies laughing* (Er... sorry, I'm reviewing as I'm listening to this, you'll unfortunately have to deal with my unorganized play-by-play here. XD) Wow, the tickling thing. Holy crap. <33333333333

"I'm going to rip out your insides and eat them for breakfast..." *gigglesnorts*

And oh, "What are you sorry for?" So perfect.

♥♥♥

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