M, this entire chapter is awesome! Also after reading the whole thing together I've come to the conclusion that the title fits perfect.
I love how you start off with Chloe's thoughts and her determination to tell Oliver there's nothing there, even though we all know she's not going to because come on Chlollie FTW, Haha. Lois and Clark staying out all night was hilarious, we know what they were doing, but what I find amusing is that they are still lying about it hee. Way to stick to your guns, but guys Chlollie totally knows you're making with the naked time haha
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Chloe is so good at living in denial and Oliver is just not having that...just like Lois truly believes she's hiding her relationship with Clark. The'yre so delusional. Chloe is definitely defensive of Ollie.
Glad you liked the scene in the office - I had so much fun writing that scene and yeah, Oliver was not amused by the interruption. Aw, again, thank you for saying that. It makes me really happy that you feel that way. *hugs*
You know as much as I hated Lois and Ollie as a couple, I'm a big fan of their friendship so it's been really interesting to write them this way where they genuinely do NOT like each other and Lois thinks he's terrible.
Chloe was so jealous...mainly because no matter what she tells herself, all she does is think about how she wants Ollie to kiss her. Glad you enjoyed them finally kissing and I'm happy you can see how much Oliver cares about her. Chloe can't quite see it yet, but he'll get her there.
As I was reading I was taking mental notes in my head of things I wanted to mention and then they kissed and it was superbly hot that it wiped out every thought in my mind, and not just the thoughts in Chloe's. It's safe to say that I loved this, and I'm looking forward to seeing Oliver continue to pursue her.
Oh, right. Victor already knowing Chloe was the Eye in the Sky--awesome. Vic is a smart guy, so that's completely believable. I was amused at how shocked he was that Ollie was Green Arrow. And how naturally Oliver fell into the leader role, even with Clark, was awesome. Lois and Clark continuing to try and hide their relationship is hilarious. And Oliver teasing Clark about his date was funny.
Thanks, Angie! Hahaha, Chlollie kisses sort of have the same effect. It's like "oh, stuff is happening, aw, look how perfect they are." I'm so happy that you enjoyed this chapter and that you're looking forward to Ollie stepping up his game, which he totally will.
Vic is a smart guy so he's known about Chloe but Ollie definitely threw him for a loop since he's used to the self-centered, arrogant version. Glad you enjoyed the Clois stuff and Ollie teasing Clark too. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ♥
Oh my god!!!! FINALLY!!! This kiss was worth to wait! Il was intense and passionate. Chloe can't hide her feelings anymore. She was so jealous!! It was again such a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Thank you! I'm glad you felt the kiss was worth the wait. Chloe was definitely jealous but she's still Chloe so she's going to be cautious. I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter; thanks again for the comments. :)
YAY! The did it! And OMG that was awesome! It was a smart move to give a press something to talk about, and the fact that it made Chloe jealous was a fantastic bonus! I'm glad that the team'd started to form, now they need to talk to Bart and AC ;) And I can't help but return to that progress their relationships had made!Finally! Although I kinda love this tension between them, you know ;) Thanks so much for this lovely chapter!Looking forward to continuation :)
Thank you! Ollie knows how to manipulate the press and I think he was grateful for the added bonus of Chloe being jealous since it worked out in his favor. Glad you're enjoying the team stuff; there's more in the next chapter. Don't worry, the tension isn't going anywhere. Chloe is still going to have some doubts. Thanks for the comments! :)
YAY!! they kissed! i was so happy that they finally kissed! and it is so like Oliver to not let her forget about it! i really hope she just gives in to him soon lol! I loved how jealous Chloe was and how Oliver caught her out on it, it was so cute and funny! and i loved how Chloe stood up for Oliver to Lois, it was so awesome! i cant wait for more!
Thanks! I'm happy that you're happy they finally kissed. Oliver is definitely not going to let her forget and Chloe is still a challenge but she's having a harder time saying no to him. Glad you enjoyed her standing up for Ollie to Lois...that's going to come into play again in the future. :)
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I love how you start off with Chloe's thoughts and her determination to tell Oliver there's nothing there, even though we all know she's not going to because come on Chlollie FTW, Haha. Lois and Clark staying out all night was hilarious, we know what they were doing, but what I find amusing is that they are still lying about it hee. Way to stick to your guns, but guys Chlollie totally knows you're making with the naked time haha ( ... )
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Chloe is so good at living in denial and Oliver is just not having that...just like Lois truly believes she's hiding her relationship with Clark. The'yre so delusional. Chloe is definitely defensive of Ollie.
Glad you liked the scene in the office - I had so much fun writing that scene and yeah, Oliver was not amused by the interruption. Aw, again, thank you for saying that. It makes me really happy that you feel that way. *hugs*
You know as much as I hated Lois and Ollie as a couple, I'm a big fan of their friendship so it's been really interesting to write them this way where they genuinely do NOT like each other and Lois thinks he's terrible.
Chloe was so jealous...mainly because no matter what she tells herself, all she does is think about how she wants Ollie to kiss her. Glad you enjoyed them finally kissing and I'm happy you can see how much Oliver cares about her. Chloe can't quite see it yet, but he'll get her there.
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Oh, right. Victor already knowing Chloe was the Eye in the Sky--awesome. Vic is a smart guy, so that's completely believable. I was amused at how shocked he was that Ollie was Green Arrow. And how naturally Oliver fell into the leader role, even with Clark, was awesome. Lois and Clark continuing to try and hide their relationship is hilarious. And Oliver teasing Clark about his date was funny.
Can't wait for more, Mandy!
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Vic is a smart guy so he's known about Chloe but Ollie definitely threw him for a loop since he's used to the self-centered, arrogant version. Glad you enjoyed the Clois stuff and Ollie teasing Clark too. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ♥
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This kiss was worth to wait! Il was intense and passionate.
Chloe can't hide her feelings anymore. She was so jealous!!
It was again such a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
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It was a smart move to give a press something to talk about, and the fact that it made Chloe jealous was a fantastic bonus!
I'm glad that the team'd started to form, now they need to talk to Bart and AC ;)
And I can't help but return to that progress their relationships had made!Finally! Although I kinda love this tension between them, you know ;)
Thanks so much for this lovely chapter!Looking forward to continuation :)
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