Solider of Love 1/1

[ihearttvsnark]

Comments

[sxymami0909]

Aw, Mandy! This story was absolutely amazing! It seriously pulls at the heart strings. I think you captured this entire scene perfectly. The way you got into Chloe's head and showed us what she was thinking was exactly how I think it happened.

It was quiet literally perfect in every way. Both Oliver and Chloe were in character and it so Oliver to have his first instinct be to feel guilty. With his character that's exactly how he would react and I love Chloe for reassuring him and telling him she'll always love him no matter what and the part where she said this ==> "Do you really think I could ever be angry at you for loving me that much?" OMG perfect! Just so much love.

I swear, M the picture they make, this small moment between Chlollie and them telling each other how much they love each other plus Chloe knowing that they had to save the world before she can him about their baby god, M. Just seriously It was amazing and so well written, ♥

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks, Cori! ♥ I'm really glad you liked this. I had it in my head for so long and it never wanted to come out. I'm happy you thought it fit into the storyline well. Poor Ollie. Guilt is like his default setting and Chloe just wants him to see how amazing she thinks/knows he is. *hugs* Thanks again. :)

[mrsoqueen]

wow, this story was amazing! i loved reading it, so much! i love the way you wrote Chloe's thoughts and feelings and emotions throughout the fic, it was really in character and just perfect! and i love that you filled in the Chlollie gaps from the episodes before the finale aswell, you explained those parts perfectly! and this story just fits right into the episode seamlessly! i could really imagine that this is exactly what happened between Oliver and Chloe before the scene we saw at the farm!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. I'm glad you thought it explained the gaps well; it's been in my head pretty much since the finale but I haven't been able to actually get it out until now. It just made sense to me that Chlollie would take a moment or two to themselves after something like that. Thanks again! :)

[f_queen]

aaaaaw, i'd never thought in this scene before this.. what you just made is perfect!! I love it!! :D

[ihearttvsnark]

Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :)

[watcharrow]

i really wished we've seen this scene on the show because that's what i think it happened ! but thanks for giving us all thoses missing parts of SV ! Amazing ! Well done...

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Offscreenville really is a double edged sword for me. It's given me tons of plot ideas, but I'd rather write less and have seen more of JH and AM on my screen. :)

[watcharrow]

oh i'm so agree with you ! I am also writting fics in french and i try to fix all those missing scene but yeah i wish i've seen more of JH and AM on screen too !

[greenteam4ever]

Thanks for that! It was really deep. It's good to get an inside on Chloe's reaction to the situation. Absolutely love it. Now I feel a strong need to re-watch the episode :)
Oh, and is it weird to think that Olli's dark eyes make him even sexier? I can't help myself since Supernatural. Kinda love this. LOL
And the banner is so awesome! No surprise here, they always are. Wanna shout out to geek_or_unique - you're doing an excellent job!

[ihearttvsnark]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I rewatched the episode (or this part anyway) before I wrote this. Hahaha...the dark eyes freaked me out. I was happy when they went away. But that's more about me hating when they torture poor Ollie. Juliete's banners are always fantastic but this is definitely one of my favorites that she's made for me.